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Reviews for Marriage Law Madness

By : wjctheatrechick
  • From Shelley on June 08, 2022

    I love this story 


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  • From purefaith91 on April 29, 2012
    Hi. I am hoping that you are going to finish this story at some point even though it has been a long while since you updated. After scanning the story (did not want to become too involved in case it would not see completion), I wanted to let you know that it would be a real shame to not finish it. It is really good. p
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  • From hup on November 07, 2010
    Wow. I left this story for so long I only remembered one pairing and it's even better than I remembered which is something I wasn't expecting. I am sorry though that the moderaters destroyed your betad version as well as possible future chapters. Hopefully you'll be in the mood to write more as I would love to see what happens. Ginny is rather obnoxious so far I hope she gets better or that someone finds a way to at least make her less violent. YAY! Molly's baby will live and so will Molly. It would have destroyed everyone if she or her daughter died. I love that you took a common challenge and revamped it into something amazing. Are there any good marriage law fics you reccomend or any fics for that matter if so PM me and let me know.
    Thank you for the privilige of reading such a well written and thought out story.
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  • From on December 02, 2007
    i really love this story and want to see more of it!!!!!
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on September 25, 2007
    So, you are back and what happened to the story?.
    where is the revised story?
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on July 18, 2007
    PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE GOING TO UPDATE THIS STORY BECAUSE I LOVE IT AND WANT TO READ MORE !!!
    PLEASE EMAIL ME AT POOHNATION74@YAHOO.COM WITH THE INFO
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  • From on May 08, 2007
    DO CONTINUE THIS STORY BECAUSE IT IS MY FAVORITE AND I HAVE READ AT LEAST TWO TIMES AND I STILL CRY AT THE TOUCHING PARTS. I LOVE HOW YOU HAVE SEVERUS AND LUCIUS, IT MAKES THEM SEEM LIKE HAPPY PEOPLE AND LOVABLE PEOPLE. PLEASE EMAIL ME WHEN YOU DO AT POOHNATION74@YAHOO.COM AND AGAIN PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY.
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  • From on April 26, 2007
    PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY I LOVE IT AND CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE REST OF IT.
    PLEASE SEND ME AN EMAIL WITH A UPDATE T POOHNATION74@YAHOO.COM THANK YOU
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  • From Akinaria on January 18, 2007
    The story went way out of control a while back! You include many many things which are not mentioned until after they have occurred - when did Hermione begin searching for her real family and when were we even told she was adopted? When did Severus adopt Harry? I mean we see him in his kitchen and he tells Molly but it is missing from the actual story!

    The smacking thing has now become really disturbing because you had the first instance of it as an almost sexual thing (which I find rather twisted but that is just taste not storytelling)!

    Why are Albus and MInerva now watching over a fifty year old woman ike a child?

    Why are they all now ridiculously ooc when they were not before (well not inexicably and not in a way which makes one queasy)?

    This has potential but the last few chapters need a huge overhaul or a new home in the cyber bin! The story itself is still chugging along nicely but technically the latter part is a mess! It is salvagable and worth the saving!
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  • From Akinaria on January 18, 2007
    This is a good story but it is riddled with inappropriate Americanisms! This is set in the UK! The most notable and huge mistake is the use of "jumper" and "sweater"! In the UK a jumper is what you call a sweater and it is a "Weasley Jumper" not a "Weasley sweater"! I know that in the US a jumper is some hideous shapeless maternity smock with no sleeves but I only know this because I used to be an editor - not many in the UK would know and will be confused by this term! We do not wear these things anyway - not since the early seventies when pregnant women began to claim the right to not dress hideously! So you need to replace sweater with jumper and if you need to keep the smocks then call them smocks and we will understand ! No British woman would use these terms - especially not in an old culture like the wizarding world!
    Good story though!
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  • From ANON - Ali on October 01, 2006
    I love this story. More original than most of the MLC's out there. can't wait to see what's next.
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  • From ANON - Eiri Yuki on September 21, 2006
    Please tell me that wasn't the end! I love it so far, though I was shocked by the pairing. Who would've guessed that those two could go together in that setting? Update soon!

    Eiri
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  • From ANON - Darque Hart on September 10, 2006
    First off - FINISH THIS! Other than that, the only complaints I have with your story is that you rushed through a lot of it. You should go through your chapters and fill in the skimmed over gaps. That plus this is SOOOOOO out of character for nearly everyone portrayed ... but that is unimportant in a 'marriage law' story. It's worth finishing or I wouldn't be typing here that it was.
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  • From ANON - Morgan LeFay on November 24, 2005
    Still waiting for more chapters....... *sigh*
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  • From ANON - wjctheatrechick on October 06, 2005
    Since there was no e-mail, I'm answering your questions here. "Wow, quiete an unusual pairing Molly/ Snape. I never thought this pairing would work well, but it is actually great. I love it. I really love stories with Snape. And having so many kids to take care of is great. But there are a few things I liked to know. How come Hermoine is living/adopted by Snape/Molly instead of living with her real parents Snape's sister/Remus or that Branstone guy?"

    At the time Hermione almost died and they bound her to Severus, they didn't know yet who Hermione's real parents were. She needs to stay close to Severus for awhile, as until she fully recovers (which can take awhile with a injury like she had, muscle damage from cruciatus, etc) she can feed off his magic if she needs to. She's also not with Felicity and Remus because they have their hands full with their two (look for a surprise in store for them a few chapters from now) She doens't know her dad well at all, will have a few evenings out to get to know him in upcoming chapters. Plus, Hermione's stepmom is still getting used to the idea - she'll probably spend part of the next holidays with them.
    And how did she find out she was adopted?

    Her parents had to tell her, as she needed her real birth certificate to get an apparition licence - you cannot fake wizarding papers, they would have told her at the ministry that she needed her magical papers - which of course she had no idea existed.

    Is Harry already adopted by Molly/Snape?
    Yes.

    If not were is he actually living as the Dursleys are dead? Does Severus know that Molly and Arthur were going to adopt Harry and how will he react?

    He is at Hogwarts, will go to Snape Manor for some of summer vacation.
    Please update soon!
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