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Reviews for Marriage Law Madness

By : wjctheatrechick
  • From ANON - imp on May 18, 2005
    I really love the Molly/Severus aspect. Molly as something other than a one-dimensional character is enchanting and you've also given a great spin on why she is often shown as being utterly overbearing, with her many control issues. The way that you put Severus across is one of the most humanised versions of him that I've read. It's very nice to read a Snape that isn't untouchable or so caught up in his own angst and selfishness that he lacks awareness of others. I always read him as someone that was quite aware, if harried.

    The way you blend the characters and their personalities and situations together makes it uneccesary for the reader to fill in gaps that many authors leave behind. I can't wait for the next update. I'm also hoping for more Severus/Molly from you as barely anyone writes it.

    -Imp
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  • From ANON - Liz on May 17, 2005
    I ADORE this story... its a nice mix of the characters... and an interesting take on the Weasely's relationship... good job over all... can't wait for the next part

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  • From ANON - alwritermom on May 16, 2005
    This is a wonderful story. Yeah, Snape is OOC, but don't ya just love him that way?
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  • From ANON - Carmella on May 15, 2005
    Halaula! MAn this chapter was great, do by all means contiue to keep it up. Oh side quetsain, who gets hooked up with Hermionie?
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  • From ANON - adelee on May 14, 2005
    I don't usually review many of the stories I read, but I just had to say that I really enjoy your story. It is definetly one that we don't usually read. Keep up the great writing, can't wait to see what happens. One question, is Hermione going to fall under the new law soon, it would seem like she would be one of the first people to. ~Adelee~
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  • From ANON - June W on May 14, 2005
    Ch 24 - I like the letters to Molly - they're funny. Poor Draco! So Lucius' father-in-law will be the Minister of Magic - nice for him. And Severus has to go shopping again; no wonder he's so busy. Thank you for updating! I got a little concerned when a few days went by without a new chapter. Looking forward to Part 2.
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  • From ANON - fraser on May 07, 2005
    you are an awesome author, i heart you
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  • From ANON - June W on May 07, 2005
    Ch 23 - So Rosmerta picked Fudge over Lucius - a big move up for a barkeeper to marry the Minister of Magic. So no one wants Lucius yet, eh... I agree that Severus would have good taste in clothing - he seems to have a very exacting eye for details, so I think he'd notice things like fabric quality and texture, etc. Hermione as daughter of Snape's sister - you mean the same sister who married Lupin? Or another sister? Why did her real grandfather want to kill Hermione and her parents? Nice to see Molly explaining to Hermione about the sweaters and Easter egg. Thanks for the new chapter!!
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  • From ANON - wjctheatrechick on May 05, 2005
    Hermione is Sev's niece by blood - she's his sister's child. The healer simply did a modified paternity test, showing he was a relative on the maternal side.

    The murderer was Hermione's real Grandfather, who is now dead due to being shot with an Avada Kadavra by both Lucius and Harry...
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  • From ANON - June on May 05, 2005
    Ch 22 - thanks for finding Hermione! So she's now Severus' niece because of the spell, which means his parents are now her grandparents? Did the aurors find who killed the Grangers and attacked Molly? Thanks for updating!
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  • From ANON - Carmella on May 05, 2005
    AWWWWWWW that story was good, full of Halmark moments but good. I liked the enddeing, it was sugery but realistic, more please!
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  • From ANON - Morgan Le Fay on May 04, 2005
    ***stomps foot---sticks out lip and pouts*** where's the rest of the story??? ***grin*** MORE, PLEASE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Carmella on May 04, 2005
    Wow! That was way cool and SWEET! Severus 's family just gets bigger and bigger, can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - dana on May 04, 2005
    ack write more to this story! i got so drawn into it i had to finish it!!!
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  • From ANON - June W on May 03, 2005
    Ch 21 - okay, so Lucius is seeking to marry Rosmerta, whose other choice is who? (Sorry, I can't remember!) Both of Hermione's parents were killed, but while I'm happy Hermione is alive, I still don't understand why the killer didn't just kill Hermione outright. Also not sure why the killer went after the Grangers and Molly. Lucius had an idea what caused the curse on Hermione, or is it something else he has an idea about? As for Severus having a niece - does that pink result mean that Hermione is now genetically blood bonded to him as a niece? She's not pregnant, right? Thank you for updating so quickly; it really helps me to remember the story details.
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