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Reviews for Spark

By : DivineAngel
  • From ANON - Ailo on June 03, 2005
    I really like this fic so far, my only slight criticism is that Severus is a bit OOC, a bit too feeling, especially with the crying bit. It's very rare that anyone can pull off Severus crying in a story and get away with it by me. It wasn't horribleby any means, but just keep in mind, this guy is a snarky bastard. Keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon!

    ~Ailo
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  • From ANON - Catpower on June 01, 2005
    I enjoyed this chapter a lot. SS in tears, HG comforting him. It was very touching. Good luck with the job.
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  • From rboothe on May 31, 2005
    Love it! Keep writing!!!!
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  • From ANON - BookLady on May 31, 2005
    Wow! That was sooo good! I love the slow build up of sexual tension as you mentioned (Girl With the Pearl Earring), it makes the scene when they actually do 'connect' all the more rewarding! Really looking forward to another chapter! Hope the plot bunnies co-operate!
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  • From ANON - Sarah123 on May 30, 2005
    Ok girl, I thought you couldn't top that first contact between H & DM in WLAB, but you did. Jees, this just keeps getting better and better! Oh wow. Update :-)
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  • From ANON - anya on May 30, 2005
    Lovely chapter.
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  • From ANON - Catpower on May 30, 2005
    Wow! Indeed. This is terrific stuff - the story is unfolding without getting tediously "plotty", the kiss was worth waiting for and there seems to be plenty going on with Ron and Harry in the background. Actually, Ron's crush has some great comedy potential in it which I would enjoy seeing exploited to the full. Harry is emerging as a tragic figure - like Lupin. I want more of this.
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  • From ANON - Ailo on May 24, 2005
    oh god, both 6 and 7 were wonderful chappies and I don't think I can handle all this sexual tension, gah! You must relive some of it women, it's about time they shagged! :X Not that I haven't loved the buildup, the story is deliciously brilliant thusfar!
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  • From ANON - Chickenofpink on May 24, 2005
    Wow really good writing... keep 'em coming please!
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  • From ANON - pyewacket on May 23, 2005
    Oh the anticipation!! When will she tell him? When will they kiss? The suspense is delicious. Keep going!
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  • From ANON - lemonade on May 23, 2005
    lol., what a tease you are!! I was talking to the computer saying "just grab him and kiss him!!!" Thank you for the speedy update, it was worth it even if we were left frustrated by the end ;) (but in a good way)
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on May 23, 2005
    Wow! The almost kiss scene was intense! Will Snape overhear Hermione tell Lupin her feelings? Or will she find the courage to tell Snape that she wants him!
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  • From ANON - Ailo on May 23, 2005
    I love it so far and I hope there's gonna be a confrontation next chapter! Oh how I love Severus' arguing ability! Please post agin soon, I wait in suspense!

    ~Ailo
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  • From ANON - Yabo on May 23, 2005
    More!
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  • From ANON - Sarah123 on May 23, 2005
    Still brilliant! But where's the smut?! You write such fabulous erotic scenes, I love the tension in the last chapter, I want more!! Guys, if you haven't read Angel's other fics you really should!
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