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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on May 25, 2005
    so all harry has to do is ax himself and old voldie dies? how sad.....
    i'm glad that harry is falling into his role with draco tho, quite a confusing mix of emotions i imagine...
    update soon..
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on May 23, 2005
    amazing chapter... update again soon!!!!! truely amazing!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 23, 2005
    Draco did the counter charm? After torturing him all day. Poor Harry! Can't wait for chapter 20!
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  • From ANON - Salyrine on May 22, 2005
    This is a wonderful story. :) Although there are a few repetitive mistakes. Like:

    [Harry sighed inwardly before reluctantly biting the sweet again. He kept his eyes low in shame. He couldn't believe he was reduced to this.
    Draco smiled, deciding that perhaps he'd have to do this more often, considering that he quite liked the almost blush that kept tinging Harry's cheeks.]

    and

    [Draco sighed, shaking his head again, fingers resting against Harry's shoulder, "Nothing? You didn't hear anything?"
    Harry was slightly freaked out by this. He took a few steps back, trying to avoid Mafloy's hands and fingers. He looked at the ground. He hated this. He knew what Malfoy was meaning now...he should have picked up sooner. What else could he be talking about in this room? "No...."]

    Also, you should try starting a sentence without using Harry and Draco so often. I'm still hoping for more!! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Sakuya on May 22, 2005
    awwwwwww!!!!! that was so sweet!!!!! ( well *i* think so at least XD ) can't wait till you update, awwww! t'was an adowible chappie ^-^ xo
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  • From ANON - Olivia on May 21, 2005
    OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thats one of the hottest things ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 19, 2005
    Was Draco watching Severus and Harry? If not he should have. Severus wants to take Harry away from Draco. He just might want to re-evaluate things. Can't wait for chapter 19!
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on May 18, 2005
    great chapter.. thank you so for the update!!!! *hugs you* update again soon!
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  • From ANON - icestar on May 16, 2005
    poor innocent harry, first he doesnt notice everyones looking at his ass, then he didnt know bout snape... what next, he finds out alby's in bestility? :P

    nice chapters (soz i missed earliers one -.-;;; )
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 15, 2005
    Oh I need chapter 18! Draco meant to do that! I'm sure of it and it probably is a bad thing to leave him alone. Even if Harry can't get off Severus can. *growl*
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on May 15, 2005
    ACK! *runs after draco* you idiot!!! you left him alone!!!!
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  • From ANON - Fefs on May 15, 2005
    Hey!! I'm loving the way their relationship is changing slowly! It's so cool to see that!! I wonder when Harry will figure out that Draco have been feeding from him. Oh that final scene about their butts was so cool! But what i really loved was the way Draco conforted Harry when he needed.. Please update really really soon!! Hugs!! Oh! I never thanked you for explaining those things like D/s thanks!! =D
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 15, 2005
    Can't wait for chapter 17! They seem to be getting along better. Draco has stopped calling him pet at least.
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on May 14, 2005
    suede pants? now thats hott!! update again soon my little writer friend!~
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on May 12, 2005
    Draco can read his mind?! That is so totally hot! And poor little Harry doesn't have a clue...*smirks* I think the thing with Voldemort is a bit disturbing. He's so old...and icky, and...old. But I'm not going to be all prejudiced until I've read it. What worries me more is probably if Harry is going to survive it or not...especially with the scar and his menthal health and all. Oh no, oh no, oh no... this is going to be baaad! Poor little Harry... *sniffs and pouts*
    Anyway, the idea with Harry/Snape got me real interested. I have a thing for Snape, you know. I really think you should consider putting Snape into this. I wonder where he would fit in...on the good or the bad side? It sort of feels it would be on the bad side... And just a thought; Couldn't Snape be able to read minds too? It doesn't sound too far fetched when you read the books...
    Oh I almost forgot; You are such a tease! How could you end the chapter right there?!! You better update fast missy!
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