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Reviews for Unexpected Results

By : IGGY
  • From ANON - eliz on July 31, 2005
    It's so adorable and fluffy. Keep writing stories! :).
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  • From ANON - IrIdeScEnT on July 27, 2005
    I aplaud you. That was a really really really sweet fanfic, and I LOVE it. Omg...that was...really good....
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  • From ANON - MiMi on June 24, 2005
    this story was so OMG-ish wOoOoOow.....it kinda touched my heart.
    I really liked this story alot , actually I loved it.
    it was just the story I wanted to read , I loved it very much! pls do keep writing more!
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  • From ANON - momoko on June 05, 2005
    wonderful story,bye
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  • From ANON - woof on May 29, 2005
    talk about a sugar rush!!!!!! sweet to the MAX!!
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  • From Dorochan on May 24, 2005
    So.. I hope you won't hit me or anything... but I have something to critize.

    I really liked the first part of the story. It would have been a great one if,... and here starts the not so nice part. In the end of chapter five, you lost it. You really did. Making Lucius the nice guy... I just did not buy it. All in all, I did not buy your happy end. It was just terribly out of character and too constructed. I got the impression that you wanted a happy end at all costs - for example plausibility.

    What you could do better: 1.) Spend more time on the characters, their motivation and their actions. 2.) Try to work on the plot a bit more. You rushed too much in the end, like you wanted to finish as fast as possible. I would have prefered it, if you had written a bit more to illustrate the feelings etc.

    Doro
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  • From ANON - Demon on May 24, 2005
    aww the last chapter is lots and lots of fluff but i like it ^-^
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  • From ANON - sbkar on May 23, 2005
    Too sweet... Thanks for the wrap-up!!! Looking forward to even more of your writings!!!!
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  • From ANON - JadeKipping on May 23, 2005
    I love fluff. Nice ending
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on May 22, 2005
    awwwwww... they are soo cute.... thank you so much for sharing.. *love*
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  • From ANON - Morgan LeFay on May 22, 2005
    WOOHOO!!!!!You finished it!!! Wonderful! It's going into my keeper pile!!!
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  • From ANON - Remi on May 18, 2005
    i love this story! ombj that was positivly the best chapter ever! can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Demon on May 17, 2005
    aww this is so adorable i can't wait for the next chapter ^-^
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on May 16, 2005
    Hm, so what will the next part be about? Well at least Draco 'fessed up!
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  • From ANON - sharon on May 16, 2005
    Just what I needed on this ole dreary day a nice story with a happy ending and I'm smiling. Thanks
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