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Reviews for The Boy Without a Soul

By : AngelofSorrow
  • From ANON - emma on August 17, 2006
    hey this is a great story keep up the good work, i hope you update again soon
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  • From ANON - JJ on October 06, 2005
    I liked it. But I have to admit, your typo's make it a little "cough, cough" hard to read your really interesting story.
    Keep writing anyway. "smile"
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  • From ANON - plotbunnybrat on October 05, 2005
    I was going to offer to beta hen you finish your story, but for some reason my w is only working about half the time.
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  • From ANON - plotbunnybrat on October 05, 2005
    The story has some spelling and grammer errors that need to be corrected. It's a good story and I hope that you continue updating. A good way to deal ith editing a story is to ignore the mistakes until you have finished writing the story. That way you are less likely to lose the story to riters block. When you finish writing the story, con one of your readers into fixing it for you.
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  • From ANON - Demon on September 07, 2005
    updaet soon please this is amazing
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  • From ANON - Tai on September 05, 2005
    *smacks all who hurt harry* bad people! no treat!
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  • From ANON - The doctors In on September 05, 2005
    You have a great story here without a doubt. You truly do need a good beta for it brings down the integrity of the story. If you hale from a different country and English is a second language, then I still recommend that you seek a beta. For all the journey it takes to learn the English language, nothing can replace seeing it written over and over the right way. I have seen dyslexia in some writing and it is interesting in itself for the person often writes the words correctly but with the words mixed up but I do not see that here. Don't settle for less. You are writing in the English language therefore I would assume that you wish to use this ability in your everyday life. It would be a lie to say that you will not have to work hard to achieve this no matter why you struggle with this. Keep trying for excellance and if you don't ever achieve it you may be still quite happy with what is accomplished. And please don't let others tell you its not important, because it is. You see this clearly when you have to write something important and it makes you seem as though you aren't a smart as I can clearly see in your writing that you are. Good luck my friend and we will keep our eyes out for your further work.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on September 05, 2005
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 4!
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  • From ANON - emma on September 04, 2005
    hey im so glad you updated i really like this story alot i hope you do so again soon

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  • From ANON - Amber on August 14, 2005
    wow this is a great plot i hope you finnish it...i tend to start stories that authors dont seem to want to finish...i really hope your not one of them for both your stories. You write to well to do that!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Aisling on June 16, 2005
    more soon please luving this so far xxx
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  • From ANON - JJ on June 14, 2005
    Poor pitiful Harry. Yea!!!!! Happy dance, happy dance. What attack? If he's a declared death eater, where is his mark? And why is he still at school? If he's valuable as a weapon, why are they letting him fall apart? Will Draco save the day? Where is Dumbledore? Where is Herm.? You have a unique (to me) angle and I hope you will continue when you return from vacation. In the meantime, public libraries will let you plug in!!!!!

    Does the title refer to the loss of Harry's soul through pain, or the idea that the fey have no soul?
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  • From ANON - Fuyu on June 14, 2005
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO......wanna read on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really, REALLY wanna read the next chapter!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2005
    omg omg omg I love the story line....I can't wait for more....the only thing that I can say is that you have a lot of misspelled words....otherwise its an awesome story! Can't wait for more!!!!
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on June 14, 2005
    OH OH OH OH this is good.... OHHHHH>.. update soon......
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