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Reviews for The Boy Without a Soul

By : AngelofSorrow
  • From ANON - sbkar on June 14, 2005
    Duckie, tighten up the punctuation...Commas are the breathing spaces; they give cadence to your speech. As you can see, semi-colons are the tangent keepers; they allow one to place similar or even contradictory ideas in the same sentence.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on June 14, 2005
    Wow! I can't wait for chapter 3! Have a great time in Arizona!
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  • From ANON - Artemis Adraine on June 14, 2005
    I really like this story, it has that darker atribute that I love. Please keep updating it, I just love it so much. I really admire the way you write as well, and hope that you continue to use the same technique throughout this story.
    Your Devoted Reader,
    Artemis Adriane
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  • From ANON - Alexa on June 14, 2005
    It progresses very well, but you really need to proof read! (example: "if he can take care of himself"... should be "if he can't take care...")
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  • From ANON - The Queen of the Darkness on April 20, 2005
    I'm feeling it. I like the story so far. Can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - Morgan on April 18, 2005
    I like! Draco Malfoy being the "hero" for once was unexpected, but a good suprise. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - duckeyed fool on April 18, 2005
    good start, keep up the good work update soon!
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  • From ANON - Dezra on April 18, 2005
    OMG, this is already breaking my heart. Harry seems broken. How could his whole house turn on him like that? More please.
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