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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Slytherin Orgy

By : TheDarkBeginning

From ANON - fragonknight01 on October 01, 2005
OH YEAH!!! Go Poppy! Go Poppy! I am like so totally jealous. If she doesn't want Snape may I have him. please?
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From ANON - sbkar on October 01, 2005
As much as I really like this story, you should be careful with names: Seamus Finnigan is a Gryffindor; Blaise Zabini is a Slytherin. Go to www.hp-lexicon.org to double-check all the names and other pertinent spellings!

You also need to have a beta-reader/editor to help you with your grammar and punctuation and sentence structure mistakes. Many sentences have ambiguous pronoun modifiers which could be talking about Harry or Draco, or both. A good site for some pointers is www.askoxford.com, a free site maintained by the Oxford English Dictionary.
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From ANON - SilentInquisition on October 01, 2005
Erm, I hate to be a buzz kill, but in like the first couple of chapters wasn't Sirius alive and ranting with Snape about the Potter/Malfoy relationship? How's he suddenly a ghost?
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From MyaMalfoy on October 01, 2005
OMG! I just found this story and I LOVE IT! This is going on my "Recommended Reading" list RIGHT NOW!! I love the whole part Veela/part Angel/part Elf with Harry and the part Veela/part Angel Demon with Draco! They're still polar opposites, but they end up complimenting so well! Tormenting Snape the way you do is hilarious!

I believe that if JK actually wrote smut about her characters that Snape seeing Dumbledore/McGonagall shagging would definitely be a way of tormenting the Potions Master that everyone loves to hate! Especially since it's a sight not even the ghosts want to witness! And then Snape/Poppy getting it on is just too effing funny!

Thank you for writing this story! I'll be checking back every day to see if you've updated. I just have one question... Why is the Magic of Hogwarts obeying Harry and Draco now, instead of Dumbledore? I'm intrigued! Can't wait for your next update. Hurry, please!
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From on October 01, 2005
Keep going I really like it! Poor snape...Why are you killing him and putting him with poppy? Lol. Anyway pelase review soon

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From ANON - GruenerWackelpudding on September 22, 2005
wow...at first I thought 'hmm doesn't sound very interesting...' but after coming here again I just tried it...and I love it, it's just soooooooooooooooooooooo cute and all the time I go aaaaaaawwwwww and nyooooooo just because (sometimes I go eeww, you know which parts, don't you? ;))
well just wanted to say load up fast pretty please!
GW
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From ANON - Reb Riddle on September 13, 2005
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE PWWWWWEEEEZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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From ANON - liquid_grace on September 01, 2005
yo more please this is really cool and i want more please.....please
i luv u
more please
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From ANON - liza123 on August 25, 2005
Please, at some point update and continue this story. Dumbly?? haunted by Lilly, James and Sirius - Severus & Poppy together (hope that lasts) hee hee hee hee hee hee hee have a cookie or three
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From ANON - bethan on August 18, 2005
Wow...i mean wow wow wow that is one of the coolest harry potter fics i have EVER read that was so cool please right more chapies (puppy dog eyes) PLEASE I AM BEGGING YOU.
i love the magic you work with words. :)
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From ANON - LadyX on August 17, 2005
*ponders* how long is it gonna be until it hits them that they can read eachothers minds??? Gerat fic you have here. Can't wait for more. Could you possibly e-mail me when you update? Poor Poor Sev. Silly Pansy for watching! The Slytherines should just know to go outside. Ron Is an Ass. He can't have NOT noticed the wings I mean they are kinda you know THERE And honestly Draco raped him...Look at their position. I mean common sence Ron If he raped Harry wouldnt be asllep and Draco wouldda been on top. Cant wait for more.
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From ANON - Phorcys on August 16, 2005
I think death by mysterious glowy orgasmic light is just too nice a way for Voldemort to go but kind of fitting. interesting new chapter hopefully no new teacher pairings will feature in the next chapter. Hopefully, like I'm not suggesting Flitwick and Hagrid just mentioning them.
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From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 15, 2005
How wonderful! I can't wait for chapter 9! I bet the students were beyond shocked.... Poppy and Severus .... Dumbledore and Minerva. Oh that would burn my eyes!
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From ANON - 734 unknown on August 15, 2005
Pooor Snape!! XDD This story kickass. Yet it is a bit disturbing
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From ANON - shola on August 15, 2005
hey this was great for me i dont mine poppy and sev scene just dumbly minerve i dont want to here a scene about them this was great again cant wait 4 the next chapter hope u have a great day bye shola!!!!!!
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