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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Slytherin Orgy

By : TheDarkBeginning
  • From lilithlefey on January 23, 2006
    OMG!!!!! that was great, i was so torn between been grossed out and laughing my ass off at some of the other pairing....-shurders- don't even wanna think about....hahah

    keep up the great work.

    *~*Lilith leFey*~*
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  • From ANON - Eeyore9990 on January 19, 2006
    I hate to leave reviews that are harsh, and I hope this doesn't seem so to you, but I tried to read your fic and simply couldn't make it past the first chapter and a half. You need a beta. If you have a beta now, then I revise my statement to: You need a competent beta. I can tell you're trying to reach for a plot in this fic, and honestly, while I applaud your efforts, it kind of fell flat for me. Have you read the books? Because your characterisations are kind of all over the place. Not to mention simple canon mistakes that are rather littered throughout. Email me for further concrit if you're really interested.
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  • From ANON - Kitten on January 19, 2006
    Its so entirely cute. I love how all the Slyterins are helping the couple and helping them out. Ron so got what he deserved. And Dumbledore, now thats something that no one has done and I congratulate you on it. He deserves it too. I think its funny how snape keeps walking in on Dumbledore and Minerva. Such odd couples in this story but cuter then hell. I love it and I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - vlredreign on January 19, 2006
    I must say that I didn't make it past the first chapter. The story itself was rather implausible, I felt. I'm for PWP as much as the next person, but even then, the thought of a bunch of people having sex on Harry's bed, then Harry just showing up out of the blue at the Slytherin dorms and ushered in like an old friend...ummm...no. If you want to write sex, just write the sex. Wrapping it in a plot that makes no sense, quite frankly, makes no sense.
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  • From ANON - venom on January 19, 2006
    wow, that took a long time to update, but it was well worth it!
    please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Raie on January 19, 2006
    W00T! W00T! W00T! Get the idea? I love the imagination in this story. I also love "running jokes" and what I call "everyday jokes". Funny things that happen throughout our regular day. Poor Snape (yes you read correctly) I actually felt a bit sorry for that guy....now as for Dummydore...he deserves all the haunting that he is getting...(you would think that he would get the idea that it isn't good to keep secrets from Harry like that...after all, all he has to do is read a few of these fanfics to see what the results of doing so are...hee hee hee) can't wait to read more :) raie Ladieraie@nc.rr.com
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  • From ANON - DarkerImage on January 18, 2006
    Ok, I'm kinda anti-random, but this story is pretty good with it... keep up the good work, and update soon!
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  • From ANON - Demon Princess on January 18, 2006
    I love it. I can't think of a word that could describe what i think of it. I think that LOVE is the closest .Update soon.
    D.P.
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  • From ANON - Painter on January 18, 2006
    Please can do more???? Pretty Please with a cherry on top?
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  • From ANON - liljademoon on January 17, 2006
    Where's the rest of it? I want more! Pretty please with a naked Draco on top? A naked Harry covered Draco?
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  • From ANON - jw on January 17, 2006
    great update keep it up
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  • From ANON - Griffyn on January 17, 2006
    More please ( A cute Griffyn sits before you holding a blank book with a sad expression on her face and her wings hanging sadly beside her.) Can I have some more please
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  • From ANON - Christopher on January 16, 2006
    That was awesome, it would be totally ironic and funny if they let ron join them, you know, when the pharamones take over, just to show him that he is an ass.
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  • From ANON - SilentInquisition on January 16, 2006
    Yes! You updated. Lol. Keep up the good work! Err... and since you took my last comment so well... Semus is actually spelled Seamus. It's been bothering me. But then, I have a thing about spelling characters names right. At least he isn't the main character, I read a story about Lucius and Harry where the author went the whole story spelling the name Luscious. Lucius can indeed be luscious, but that isn't his name. *looks sheepish* sorry about the rant... I'll just be going now, but please, update soon!
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  • From ANON - Rayvenfire2005 on January 16, 2006
    Loved it! Can't wait for more. Please update soon!!!
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