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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Slytherin Orgy

By : TheDarkBeginning
  • From ANON - Erica on November 04, 2005
    wow! keep going. I really enjoyed it.

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  • From ANON - theresa on November 04, 2005
    oh my Dumbledore and Magonagall going at it....arrrrrgggg oh my brain, just thinking about it made me gag, poor Snape, I really feel fr him. Harry and Draco damn they are bloody hot. The fiction is full of smut, but i bloody love it...I can't wait for for the next chapter....
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  • From ANON - Alexa on November 04, 2005
    So, when will be an actual update?
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  • From ANON - Amedeo on November 04, 2005
    I love this story!! The Snape tormenting has been wonderful! LOL Anyway you have me on pins and needles waiting for more of the story. Just so you know it is very well written and has been easy and enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to your updates!
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  • From ANON - Saske\'s Iris on November 03, 2005
    haha "they're at it again!!" just sent me into giggles, love the story always looking forward to an update from you and i hope your knee gets better that...ouch ..i mean ouch...hope u feel better :)
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  • From ANON - Jet on November 03, 2005
    I love this story. It's great I was laughing so hard tears were going doen my face at times and so sweat and loving at other times. I feel bad for snape but not for dumbdork. Look forword to reading more.................Jet
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  • From ANON - jake on November 03, 2005
    Sorry about the double post.

    I just wanted to comment and say that your story is quite addicting and cute. I love the interaction between the two different houses. Its nice to have a story where they are finally getting along. I must say though, Where is the love for the Hufflepuffers? We only have one representative in this story, and the girl isn't even sexing anyone up. Dissapointing. Also, a lovely Seamus/Dean section would be absolutely wonderful, and I would even love to see Blaise coming in on that action. One more thing, Harry and Draco always use the preparation spell for their 'mating'. You know... There are some -other- ways of lubrication (If you catch my drift)

    In conclusion Five out of Five Dentists approve.
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  • From ANON - Missi (again) on November 03, 2005
    Are the ghosts getting off on the Harry/Draco golden light magic energy thingy? If so, what happens exactly when a ghost orgasms? Does Myrtle still sound all whiny and shrill? Sorry, that just struck me.
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  • From ANON - Missi on November 03, 2005
    I love this fic!! I hope your knee heals properly~mine didn't and I'm 25 with arthritis in my right knee. To start with. Just follow Dr.'s Orders to the letter and you'll be fine. Anyway, I'm so glad you wrote this fic~I love it (it bears repeating) and I can't wait for more! I love the multiple pairings all squicking eachother out. I did have one question, tho~if Harry and Draco decide to "bond" outside, will the castle transport everyone INSIDE?
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  • From ANON - maureen on October 29, 2005
    Ahhh! Okay, so having now read all that is posted of this story, i can sort of understand the first chapter and the way it was written. The dumbledore/mcgonagall stuff and snape/pomfrey....my eyes, dear gods, my eyes! anyway, yeah, this is really good, really good...but wasn't sirius arguing with snape in an earlier chapter, and then he was a ghost? i dunno, i read that part last night then finished this morning. so i am going to be waiting for an update now, and I hope your knee feels better/gets better. ^_^
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  • From ANON - maureen on October 28, 2005
    I hope you don't mind constructive criticism; otherwise ignore the better part of this review.

    I really enjoyed it; the summary caught my attention right away. ^_^ Only, it jumped in so immediately, and I don't understand why Gryffindor was having on orgy on his bed in the first place. Is it, like, a common thing, or completely spontaneous? Potion induced maybe? And if it was Poition induced or spontaneous, where was harry that he wasn't invited in? And are the slytherins on better terms with the Gryffindors now that they would invite potter in so willingly, or is it just because he's that dead sexy? ^_^ well, it's not like i'd deny harry the chance to join in any orgy i was having...but still.

    There were some really good lines- i love harry pouting and being all "No one wants to touch me?" And draco's "fingers. out. now." and then "IN. NOW!" That is soo him. I think the sex went a little fast in the part where draco sucked him off, plus there was no real description of what was going on around them; you'd think he would hear other people moaning and other "Fuck, yes there!"s and "faster"s, "harder"s or whatever. When Draco claimed him though and everyone else moved off, it was...better. What was the whole thing with the movie though? Like, was harry watching gay porn? I can see that going over well at his uncle's house...*eyeroll* (although he probably stole it from dudley. ~.^)

    the end of the chapter was...a little odd. i mean, it just mentions the glow and that everyone else will tell them later. and they're sleeping on a bed, naked, in the middle of the slytherin common room? Wouldn't that be a little too...lewd for the little firsties to come out to in the morning? and...well, i guess with the gryffindor orgy harry wouldn't be missed so much, since they're a little busy right now. nevermind.

    Yeah, this was really good though. I am eager to see where it is going.
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  • From ANON - Ash on October 27, 2005
    I really enjoy this tory so far. it's interesting! cant wait until the next chapter!! keep writing!
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  • From ANON - elecktra on October 25, 2005
    That was great! I love it! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - moony2 on October 20, 2005
    I am sorry to hear about your knee it sounds painful.i hope that you will still be able to continue this story. update when you can.
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  • From ANON - Amessis on October 01, 2005
    Loved that! Nice job.
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