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Reviews for Harry Potter and the DDR machine.

By : TheDarkBeginning
  • From lightgoddess on May 19, 2005
    That was a great fic! I can't wait for the update!! I'm a pretty big fan of Depech Mode, and I LOVE that song! It totally fit snape!
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 19, 2005
    Yes, yes, yes! Beautifully written.

    You are welcome for the song, I can just hear Severus singing it, his voice permeating my body *shivers*...Oooo

    Excellent chapter and now, the rest of the story is going to be so juicy, a Slytherin Seduction!!!!! I can't wait.

    If giggling makes you write faster, then I send you a virtual enslavement to tickling.

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  • From ANON - Linwe on May 18, 2005
    Wow. I'm not much of a yaoi or HP fan, but Tari (Loki Tarien) recommended the story and... wow. This is really good. Don't worry too much about squirrel attacks, she's gonna be a good little squirrel or else her beta-muse is gonna go on strike.

    Looking forward to more chapters!

    ~Linwe
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  • From ANON - Gwen on May 18, 2005
    This is realy good! i hope theres more soon. i also think the songs you have used are realy appropriet.
    i love it!
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  • From ANON - Ice on May 18, 2005
    /First thing tomorrow....I start Operation, SNARRY!/

    YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SNARRY!?!

    Its wrong.
    It's oddly wrong.
    But at the same time, it's oddly...sexy.

    GET-A-Typing.
    *is one to talk*

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  • From ANON - Loki Tarien on May 18, 2005
    Operation SNARRY.... heh... good good. length doesn't matter when the chapter is good. :) Glad to be of service!!!
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 17, 2005
    I'm still waiting for an update.......

    Oh yea, I was supposed to help you, *gah*

    I thought maybe Severus could sing and dance to "Enjoy the Silence" by Depeche Mode. It's slow enough for him, if he's not a good singer/dancer but also has a quicker section for him to ad lib some smooth moves. I've included the words for you to review, that is if you haven't already thought of something appropriate. You'd have to change the 'girl' to 'boy'. The first stanza explains Harry breaking into Severus' world; The next stanza speaks of Harry and Severus' unspeakable understanding of each other and how if they parted, how it would hurt too much. All they need is each other in their arms. I think it fits very nicely. Don't you?

    Artist: Depeche Mode
    Song: Enjoy the silence
    Album: Violator
    [" Violator " CD]

    Words like violence
    Break the silence
    Come crashing in
    Into my little world
    Painful to me
    Pierce right through me
    Can't you understand
    Oh my little girl

    All I ever wanted
    All I ever needed
    Is here in my arms
    Words are very unnecessary
    They can only do harm

    Vows are spoken
    To be broken
    Feelings are intense
    Words are trivial
    Pleasures remain
    So does the pain
    Words are meaningless
    And forgettable

    All I ever wanted
    All I ever needed
    Is here in my arms
    Words are very unnecessary
    They can only do harm

    All I ever wanted
    All I ever needed
    Is here in my arms
    Words are very unnecessary
    They can only do harm

    Enjoy the silence

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  • From wiccanb1tch on May 17, 2005
    hi again... i sure hope you continue this one... or this squirrel will hafta attack you!! :P wuff woo!!! (yea it's really good)

    -The Squirrel
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  • From foxracerchick129 on May 05, 2005
    aww this is cute so far. I really like it!

    Please continue soon - Jessica

    *loads of chocolate frogs for you, your muse, and your poor hands
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 04, 2005
    You've done a marvellous job on the songs and I didn't notice, if any spelling errors. You have a keen sense of getting the right song for how the characters feel about what's going on. That's not easy to do. I love how you've picked out very recent songs, except for Phantom of the Opera, but that was recently redone. lol

    While not true to canon, the characters exhibit a flip side to their personalities. The closest any of the books come to this is in Book 5 with Professor Umbridge pushing Harry's proverbial buttons. With Albus doing the pushing, in his own incessant way, Harry is again forced into doing something he doesn't understand or want to do. I hope he can find a way to talk to Professor Snape about his feelings. It would release some of the tension that Harry is now feeling. Draco and Donovan would also play a role to support? Harry.

    Great job of the story. At first I didn't think this would amount to much, but man, was I wrong. It must be fairly hard to sing and dance at the same time, especially when not practiced. How does Professor Snape fit into the Room of Requirement? Will he sing in a marvellously baritone voice? Will he dance or at least attempt to???? Definately a funny and humourous part of the story. lol OR maybe I'm wrong about your Professor Snape. Maybe he CAN dance or at least keep up with the machine. Now, what would be an appropriate song for him????

    Please post soon, this is just getting into the good part.
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  • From ANON - Paula on May 04, 2005
    Wow. This is really good so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope that you'll update soon, please. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix 5 on May 04, 2005
    Hi,
    I hope you will continue this story, I like it very much. And will you let Snape and Harry talk to each other?
    Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth on May 04, 2005
    Wow. This is great. I love DDR and Harry Potter. You put the two together quite well.
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  • From ANON - Kirith on May 03, 2005
    I really enjoyed reading this! You should definitely add to it! There aren't enough Harry Potter fics that have DDR cause no one else can PULL IT OFF!!! *cries* OoH! You should get Snape to dance! XD Or not, but hey, it was worth a shot >^_^
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  • From ANON - kittie on May 03, 2005
    i really like this story....are you goin to add more to it? i've bookmarked it so i can come back and look at it again.
    thanks for "listening" -kittie
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