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Reviews for A Pale Shadow

By : fearonpenneth
  • From ANON - Fairy1 on June 01, 2005
    This is really excellent! I love the plot so far and I can't wait for the next update! Great writing, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - antipyro on June 01, 2005
    That was really painful to read, the part in the prison. The torture was hideous.

    Yes, who was under the blanket? I'm guessing Severus had the black eyes.

    But you must update to let my heart rest, in some comfort, knowing that he is still alive.

    Please, update soon.
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  • From ANON - JJ on June 01, 2005
    I'm hooked!!! I found this in the latest section and boy, am I glad I did!! I have no criticisms to make, except the cliffie is killing me! Who is that??? Snape, Voldie, Moody, ????? What will he do to Fudge? Please make it painful and gruesome! I wonder how Harry was able to escape being outright killed by Fudge if he was that determined to take over their world like that? How did he justify what he did to the ones who won the war for him? What will Harry do with the rest of his life and how will he fix it for the survivors.
    You know, torture - of the physical or emotional sort, never really leaves a person. And the trouble is that often those who live with/love them never really understand why they can't just "get over it" and get on with their lives. Those who are victims lose a part of themselves that was very special; delicate and fragile. Those around them who have this core intact don't understand this loss and seldom feel like paying the emotional price of constantly trying to resupply what was taken away. It takes a very special person to understand this and love the person through it all. It also takes someone with incredible resources to return to something approaching who they were before.
    I look forward to seeing how you have your characters work through this.
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  • From ANON - Hambares on June 01, 2005
    Update as soon as you can! I love this story!
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  • From ANON - DIVA on May 28, 2005
    I really enjoyed the first few chapters of this story. It shows a different angle to what could happened if Fudge survived the final battle but Dumbledore didn't. It depicts Fudge's attitude of the fourth and fifth books. You don't have to be a dark lord to want to control everything. Fudge thinks more of power than the truth.
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  • From ANON - miststalker on May 18, 2005
    It's a good story I think that you have something good here. The one thing that I am noticing continuily is the fact that you use the wrong words sometimes.

    ie chapter four:
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 17, 2005
    Oh, Wow! I just found this and it's really a great story.

    Poor Severus in Azkaban, Harry must get him out NOW!

    Fudge never was a favourite of mine. Just a stuffed shirt, huffing and puffing! I know he'll get his.....*snickers deviously*

    Oh, and Harry has his own army of friends, ex-enemies and the Order. I love the idea, just not too clear on how it happened. Oh, well, it really doesn't matter anyways.

    So, if Harry was in coma for almost a year, Severus would have been in Azkaban for almost that length of time too. OUCH! Poor Severus, I hope he'll be o.k. Please, Please????

    Please write more and soon. This is a great story and you've written it well. I've noticed some grammatical errors, but I can still make out the inference. Not a flame, just a comment.

    Just keeping writing this!
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  • From ANON - Hambares on May 17, 2005
    Oooh, can't wait for more updates!
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on May 17, 2005
    This is a very interesting read. I am enjoying your characterizations . I'm fying to see how Snape is when Harry finaly gets him back.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - manx on May 17, 2005
    I think that this is going to be one of my favorite stories. I am looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - TEC on May 17, 2005
    Very interesting story. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Kaitlin on May 17, 2005
    That was amazing. Are Fudge and the ministry now a dark regime or just uneducated bastards? I'm a little confused how that was allowed to occur, but I guess war creates chaos. Well please update soon I would like to see how Severus is doing, i hope he's not too broken.
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  • From ANON - Hel Bee on April 20, 2005
    Hi

    I like the premise of the story and the feel of almost Nazi!Fudge with SS type disappearances. You have a good style which is easy to read. I look forward to next installment.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on April 19, 2005
    I truly love the way that you have written these first three chapters. I love how you slowly unravel what has happened inbetween when harry went into the coma, and what happend while he was in it. Though i am eagerly awaiting when he finally meets up with Severus, lol. Best of luck in continuing this and keep up the amazing work.

    - Jessica
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  • From ANON - pinktarg on April 19, 2005
    This post-war reality is one I think is quite feasible. With Harry out of action and Dumbledore dead, it would be a perfect time for Fudge to imprison those wizards he felt were a threat to his reign and to seize the lands, money, and power of any wizard he could. I'm very intrigued by your first 3 chapters and like the unhurried pace at which you are revealing the horror that occurred while Harry was in the coma. I hope that you decide to continue the story and look forward to your next update.
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