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By : Neery
  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2005
    Yay! I love when my imagination follows the author's plot. Your transition proved far more believeable than the one my imagination had come up with. Kudos! OH, and I liked the whole "am I evil now?" bit... very nice.
    Now I'll just have to sit and see how well Harry will accept this new eqality in their relationship, and how poor Draco will react when he finds out HE was under the potion. Oh, that'll be a fun chapter to write, no doubt...
    The mystery guy ( who I have an inkling is either Sev or one of Draco's dorm mates) stopps, figuring the horror Draco experiances once he returns to his correct mindset would have to satisfy him as the potion bit backfired bigtime
    The shock Harry gets when he wakes with Draco snuggling with him (maybe wakes due to morning fondling by our blonde beauty, even?)
    I'll stop talking now. Anyway, awaiting update.
    LadyE
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  • From ANON - RiTiNhA on August 16, 2005
    I started reading this fic an hour ago and I couldn't stop! Wow, a submissive Draco, very hot! I must say I simply LOVE angst but I prefer when is with Harry... you could try to put Harry breaking down on Draco (after all he is much stress and all that stuf..). Well, I only want to know if it will be a nice happy ending in this fic! I know, angst and drama are very good but I can't read a fic when they don't stay togheter in the end... please, tell me if it's going to be sad! =P Oh, and I want to say that I love the sex scenes but this last one was the greatest, because it had... care. I hope they talk and work up their relationship.... Please update soon and good luck in your writing! Sorry the bad english but I'm portguese and I'm still learning! ^_^' ******
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 16, 2005
    Does Draco give him another chance or walk away? I can't wait for chapter 13!
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  • From ANON - Dezra on August 16, 2005
    I know this is a spell on Draco's part, but I hope they get together anyhow. I love Draco. Harry seems to be coming around slowly.
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  • From ANON - Alexa on August 16, 2005
    YES! You updated! And so soon too! Fantastic! And the watcher - I can relate - who wouldn't want to see what happens next in such a story... :-)
    I can't wait to see how things will go from here!
    And you nailed the point on Harry feeling entitled, and how it relates to Tom. Cool!
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  • From ANON - stef on August 16, 2005
    cool story.. poor harry.. and draco!
    gosh i hope they work it out soon and get together ... erm... emotionally...
    anyway, please update again soon
    Stef
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on August 15, 2005
    And it would serve Harry right for Draco to walk away. But in Harry's defense he doesn't know what love is. He doesn't understand what Draco has been giving him. Can't wait for chapter 11!
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  • From ANON - Fefs on August 15, 2005
    Awww, Semira, you're killing me!!!! I was crazy here wanting to see the scene where Draco end up the affair and Harry starts seeing his feelings!! But this chapter is gorgeous.. Draco's mind telling him that what he want is wrong.. Lucius attitude! I loved it! Hugs!
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  • From ANON - omizu on August 15, 2005
    nnnnuuuuhhh he's not allowed to get over harry. Harry must grovel!! and then they should make up and and have hot make up sex T__T
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  • From ANON - Alexa on August 15, 2005
    This one was great! How Draco finally decided to take his life back... I feel so... proud of him, and so glad!
    And I can't wait to see how it plays out. I wish him the best of luck! And that he at the very least sucseeds in controling his actions and in getting back his self-respect. And maybe then - the respect of Harry, and Harry's recognition that he's a human being...
    Thank you again for this story - it's a joy.
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  • From ANON - Fefs!! on August 13, 2005
    Ahhhh!!! Things will be different now! The malfoy self steem is back (kind of) and Harry will have a run for his money!! I'm soooo happy that you updated! Your fic is fantastic! Amazingly PERFECT!! And super original!! Hugs!!
    Ps: Thanks again for answering me!!
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  • From ANON - LadyE on August 11, 2005
    okay...
    sorry to impeed on your artistic image, but I just had a most pleasent chain of events play out in my head as to How the boys handle this that *might* work for you, and give our dearest Drakiepoo a break. If you're stuck (as I've often been with one of my stories) and any alteration of it works for you, feel free to incorporate it as you see fit.
    Harry now feels bad for putting Draco through what he had, as you've made no push to turn him into one of the brooding, depressed and dark Harry's. As such, his Gryffindor conscience feels he has seriously wronged Draco, and decides that he needs to set it right. Thinking he can take any punishment (invisioning a beating, of course) Draco can dish out, he gives him a night's free reign, promising himself that after whatever pain he experiances, Draco and he'll be square. He offers, able to get the words out with only a slight cringe (outward, anyways). Draco, however, thinks this his big chance to be with Harry the way *he* wants to, which leads to a great deal of Harry's confusion as Draco just wants to kiss and cuddle, constantly waiting for the moment to snap and the beating (physical or sexual) to begin, going as far as finally pointing it out to Draco outloud when the oddness of the situation had bugged him too long.
    From there, you can have Harry start to realize Draco really may have been telling the truth about the dreaded L-word, or you may have him push the experiance aside as something manipulative entirely...
    anyway, just a thought. LadyE
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  • From ANON - NightShade on August 11, 2005
    Oh my poor Draco! I hope he won't do anything completely stupid - like some love potion or someting like it.
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  • From ANON - Pureblood on August 11, 2005
    You have to update, and I mean now. This story is so good, and your writing is as well, save for the few typos that I saw. Just a few minor ones. UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2005
    thats awsome.. so good !
    cant wait till u update
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