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Reviews for Kneeling

By : Neery
  • From ANON - Semira on August 02, 2005
    Thank you for commenting!
    From chapter three onward, there were already spaces between the paragraphs, but I went back and added them for chapter one and two, too.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on August 02, 2005
    You said you were accepting criticism, so here goes. The story is great, fabulous, don't change a thing. Can you possibly put spaces between the paragraphs? My eyesight is not great, and it is really wearing to try to read with it all smushed together like that. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - NightOwl on August 02, 2005
    It is very very painful. I would like to catch Harry, slap his face, yell on him long time and make him to go to Draco and really comfort him. I would like to catch that bastard who gives the potion to Draco and kill him really slowly (maybe to cut his heart out using only spoon).
    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Semira on August 02, 2005
    Alexa, it seems like our definitions of "bad" differ quite a bit. To me, what Harry did was pretty bad - using sex to humiliate someone, to me that's more personal than just beating them up. (Especially in the wizarding world, where it's pretty impossible to hurt someone so bad they can't be healed instantly, or at least overnight, with a spell or potion.) Ah, well - glad you liked it anyway.
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  • From ANON - Dezra on August 02, 2005
    Does Harry ever pull himself together? Where are all these violent feelings coming from? You need to update faster.
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  • From ANON - Alexa on August 02, 2005
    Huh. This wasn't at all as bad as I feared/expected. I thought he'd beat him up while Draco was pleading, etc. Oh, well. I liked Harry's power trip. Will there be a rendition of this from Draco's point of view?
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  • From ANON - raven on July 30, 2005
    great story, please update soon. is harry going to hurt him more, i mean not punching but bdsm cause this is a hot n interesting story. like how harry's anger builds n how he takes it out on malfoy. most story's dont show that part. keep it up, terrific hd story
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  • From ANON - PW on July 20, 2005
    NOOO! You can't end it there!! The suspense is killing me! Who did this to my poor Draco?
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  • From ANON - Argo on July 20, 2005
    Merlin, it was awesome! Dark and full of concern, perfect describing of Harry's confusing and suppressed emotions, his worry and feeling of helplessness. I so afraid that he is going hurt Draco for something Lucius had done! On one hand, it's understandable, because Draco is a closest thing to Lucius, Harry can reach and can hurt, but on other hand, Draco being used by someone to get to Lucius already, and he is used by Harry too, and now if Harry will hurt him (and he had promised he will nor hurt him!) it would so unfair to Draco! It's horrible. I look forward to next chapter and just hope, Harry wouldn't hurt Draco.
    He, he must already get his head clear and do something useful, like busy himself with learning as much spells as he can, and get Hermione to blurt out secret of her research, and find out why Remus's letters are so strange. I surprised that Harry doesn't do anything except worrying. He is Gryffindor, they must be act, not worry. %)
    But I so afraid for Draco now...

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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 19, 2005
    Why is Draco doing this? Did Lucius do that to Remus or did he help him? Harry's about to do something really really stupid isn't he? He's going to really hurt Draco.... Can't wait for chapter 8!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2005
    UPDATE! PLEASE!
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  • From Neery on July 19, 2005
    Alexa, I don't want to spoil it for the people who enjoy the uncertainty, so I'm not going to answer on the review page, but if you really want to know if there's going to be a happy end, I've sent you an e-mail.
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  • From Alexa on July 19, 2005
    Oh! I'm scared! Oh God! Someone help poor Draco!
    I have to ask - will this be a happy end? Even if it takes a long time, just tell me, so that I can keep reading.
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  • From ANON - NightOwl on July 19, 2005
    Ow. I'm trembling for Draco's safety now. My heart is bleeding for him.

    I like your story very much.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2005
    Please update soon!
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