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Reviews for Kneeling

By : Neery
  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 17, 2005
    Can't wait for chapter 7! At least he isn't in deniel....
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  • From ANON - adrianpukeface on July 16, 2005
    Hmm interesting... i think harry should start feeling a little sorrier for malfoy though. when will he find out about the potion? keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Semira on July 16, 2005
    Oh, you're right, that seems to be a bit of a paradox, I'd probably better go back and add some sentences to clarify - the love spell effect of the potion wears off, so if Draco doesn't take it for some time he won't be made to love Harry anymore. However, the indirect effects - allowing Harry to humiliate him, the risk of getting caught, all that - will of course add up, and the longer he is under the spell, the more havoc it will wreak on his life.
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  • From Alexa on July 16, 2005
    I have a question:
    In the second chapter the mistery man thought: "A pity - he had hoped Draco would contact his father right away. This meant he would have to make another batch of the potion, to make sure the spell didn
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  • From Neery on July 16, 2005
    No, I'm still planning to finish it. Real Life just got very busy for a while and didn't leave me much time for writing. New parts coming up as soon as I can manage it.
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  • From ANON - ... on July 13, 2005
    come now... don't tell me you're ditching the fic!


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  • From ANON - Elizabeth SPiegel on May 09, 2005
    YAY GREAT GREAT GREAT, can't wait to read more! I wanna know who's the guy getting revenge on Draco? And everything else....please update soon!
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  • From Sarryn on May 08, 2005
    Wonderful and extremely hot chapter. I cannot hold back my eagerness for more.

    Much easier to read! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - ura on May 08, 2005
    Oh, forgot to mention. I am very glad that Harry was so careful with Draco while being intimate with him.
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  • From ANON - ice owl on May 07, 2005
    Poor Draco! You have such a sweet vulnerable guy here that I just want to scream at Harry to shut up and give him all the love and comfort that he needs.
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  • From ANON - ura on May 07, 2005
    Nice chapter. Who is the mystery man? Could it be Snape?
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  • From ANON - Fefs on May 07, 2005
    Wow.. what a sexy chapter.. soo hot!! Poor Draco.. this potion got him bad! He is desperate to have anything from harry!! I love the way you are showing us their emotions!! really good!! I hope harry falls in love with Draco too.. This blond is just too cute on this fic... So loving... Well, please update soon again, ok?? This is only getting better everytime i see another chapter!! Hugs and congratulations!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 07, 2005
    Poor Draco! Harry couldn't be arsed to undress? Not even take off his pants? Kept his eyes closed? Draco deserves so much better! And just who is this man? It's driving me crazy! Can't wait for chapter 6!
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  • From ANON - Alexa on May 07, 2005
    Yey! Another chapter!
    Cool, I liked how you did Draco's point of view. And the whole thing was very... honest I guess. More real.
    But what do you mean - making the effects irreversible? Oh my! I don't know if I like it or not. Ok, not. But it is your story, so you deside.
    Thanks fot the responce - I'm glad I didn't guess it all - I like surprises.
    Hope your cought gets better. :-)

    You know, I tried for the first time to write something of my own - could you read it and review? Would be nice to get imput. It's called "Love by Numbers".

    P.S.: By the way, you might want to change "floor" into "ground" in the text.
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  • From ANON - kenzi on May 07, 2005
    hmmm.. this is very original, still kinda difficult for me to get used to the idea that its Draco with the love and Harry with the lust.. but its very original and very well written.. cant wait for more!
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