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Reviews for Hidden In Time

By : Jessica
  • From ANON - ............i. on September 14, 2006
    crap..:)
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  • From ANON - Danine on April 24, 2005
    Did you say "might be a Mary Sue", because it already is. Not that there's anything wrong with posting a Mary Sue, because you fully admitted it might actually be one, and I'll have to applaud you on that part. However, the first chapter was very small and you might want to consider using a beta, or rereading what you've written before it's posted. It didn't make much sense, I'm sorry.
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  • From ANON - Akai\'zhar on April 23, 2005
    Uh... Intresting story you just need to explain why she has silver hair, amber eyes and claws... ANd you really need help.. much more so than me ^_^ Luv ya hun!
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