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Reviews for My Immortal

By : FaeChild
  • From ANON - Jaima on June 23, 2005
    Are you going to delve more into what happen to Harry? I really enjoyed the story so far. Can't wait for the update.
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  • From ANON - momoko on June 22, 2005
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - antipyro on June 22, 2005
    No, that was just fine! You shouldn't be so angsty about your writing, it's beautiful.

    I would have thought that if this was the first time they are making love, you didn't say they had sex before, that it would be, ummm, a lot more involved. Not that this wasn't good, Hmmmm, it was delicious. It's just that being so 'into' one another now, it would have been special, somehow.

    Don't worry, it was still very good and I love your writing. Please continue and I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter, sounds exciting!!!
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  • From ANON - Missi on June 22, 2005
    This is a pretty good fic. Please update soon.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on June 22, 2005
    Aww that last chapter was so sweet. I cant wait to see more, like everyone elses reactions
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  • From ANON - Hambares on June 22, 2005
    Thanx for updating! I had almost given up. So glad you had Harry come find Severus. It was perfect
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  • From ANON - momoko on May 30, 2005
    hi,good story,bye
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  • From ANON - Demon on May 28, 2005
    it's really really good i love the story line and the way Harry disappeared ^-^ can't wait for the next chapter

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  • From ANON - Eowynselixure on May 20, 2005
    Hey, I'm going to state some VERY minor critiscims before I praise you, simply because doing it in the reverse always makes the praise sound false.

    Severus seems a little out of character at times - not all of the time just in some places like where he ran to the headmasters office.
    and is there such thing as 'a hurried voice?'
    I wish your chapters were a little longer (but ignore this as everyone always says it to me.)

    Now I LOVE Evanescence and this song is exelent - although I have to say I like 'Hello' more but this song fits perfectly with the story and the story is good!
    Trust me its good, I love how Harry hasn't aged and has no memory of whats been going on the past five years, now Severus can't yell at him!
    I love how Harry's animagus form is an eagle, so origonal... I don't think I've come across that before. It's always some mystical crearure ya no.

    Anyway update REALLY soon otherwise my geneticall modified potato will come and eat you! No joke!

    *Eowyns elixure

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  • From ANON - blue bells on May 19, 2005
    not really understanding what's going on but i like it!! although anything with harry/severus is probably good!!! please updae more, so everyone can read this great story!!! i kow i ca't wait till the next post!!!
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  • From foxracerchick129 on May 16, 2005
    Yay your back! Ooh and I loved the update! Please update again soon

    **loads of chocolate frogs for you and your muse ** - Jessica
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  • From ANON - Kaitlin on May 16, 2005
    Your story telling style is flowing, I like it a lot. I also like the story so far, but I am curious to know why Severus bolted, shock? please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Laurel_runes on May 01, 2005
    Wow! Love it so far...very moving. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - yana on May 01, 2005
    It's a very nice beginnning.
    I wonder which spel Harry used in the final battle and how he got away. (Harry isn't really dead right?!)

    Well I hope you continue with this story.
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  • From ANON - Arwen Rayne on April 28, 2005
    Chapter 2: It is quite good. The emotional intensity was well developed. Good job!
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