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Reviews for The Power Lies Within

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  • From ANON - fraser on May 15, 2005
    this is really good, please update soon?

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  • From ANON - GinnyW on May 15, 2005
    Nice job. I like the cliffie at the end. So, are her parents dead? Awful lot of pressure on an 18 yr old...have to get married and have a child right away, I think that you are doing a fairly good job of showing her emotions as being overwhelmed. I'll keep following along. Cheers! ~Ginny
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  • From ANON - Tris on May 14, 2005
    wow update it now. i really like it, if you leave a cliffy, you gotta give me the rest of it.
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  • From ANON - siriusluv on May 14, 2005
    The writing is not bad. There is absolutely no way Professor Dumbledore would let Harry Potter go to a muggle house with Voldemort on the loose. Harry would be dead as soon as he stepped off the platform. Harry is only safe at the Dursley's because of the blood magic that protects him. Sorry my imagination does not stretch that far.
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  • From ANON - gizmama on May 14, 2005
    I am really enjoying this story and can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Carmella on May 08, 2005
    Sweet! Dude I would have never thought of that, man do I so want to read more please?
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  • From ANON - Golden on May 07, 2005
    thisis really good! Please write more and soon :9
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  • From ANON - fraser on May 06, 2005
    aweome story but one minor error, the timeturner was used in her third year, not fourth
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  • From ANON - Ginny on May 05, 2005
    I think that your story has potential. I have notebook full of plot bunnies and what you have laid out here is similar to one of them. The whole LV prophecy incorporated with a MLC (my favorite stories, when well written). A beta would be a huge asset. One that not only checks the grammer, etc, but also a canon beta...I'm a huge stickler for canon and become quickly annoyed when canon is overlooked. Case in point: During their 7th year, Hermione is 18 as of September 19th...no need for time-turner and other such nonsense (especially since Fudge implied that time-turners didn't exist). This time-turner to make her legal age drives me batty and JKR made it unnecessary, but it's still in use even after she told us. :-? Keep writing, as I said, your story has potential... Cheers! ~Gin
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  • From ANON - angel on May 05, 2005
    oh my god ....well that was a way to put it .... please update soon i need to know what happens next

    angel
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  • From ANON - Kayree on May 04, 2005
    Update!!!! & quickly! I LOVE hermione & severus pairings & I REALLY love marriage law fics. Yours is really different. Its great!!! Keep it coming!
    Love & Luck,
    Kayree
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  • From ANON - catpower on May 03, 2005
    A bit of a short chapter - but at least now we know exactly where things are going. Sev is looking very frightening in Dumbledore's office. Personally, I would like him to seem extra ferocious as Hermione hears that she has to marry him and stay ferocious and forbidding until they are actually married! I'd like H to be REALLY scared of him - and then get a nice surprise when he turns out to be alright really.
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  • From slygriff21 on May 01, 2005
    Great chapter! Update soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - angel on May 01, 2005
    ahhhhhhhhhh.. please update soon i nee to know what happens next ~crys ~why all the cliffhanger ! Did you know that is a form of torcher .... but i do really really really like your story .
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  • From ANON - BertMC on May 01, 2005
    Ywaaahhhhhh, New Chappie! Short but needed. More please!
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