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Reviews for The Power Lies Within

By : Hedwig8347
  • From ANON - Innogen on May 01, 2005
    Everything is moving quickly, and I find this appealing. And then, it stopped. Bummer. Hope you can write fast :P
    Inn~
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  • From slygriff21 on April 30, 2005
    Great start! Can't wait to read more! Update soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - JJ on April 30, 2005
    So far, so good! I like that Harry is enjoying himself, and the hint that Herm. thinks there is something wrong in Snapes life was good. A little tease to set things up. I'm sorry that your Harry feels that way about the Weasley's. He is from two worlds and he can be comfortable and enjoy both worlds with the emphasis on enjoying his first muggle christmas. But that's my opinion and its your story - which I'm looking forward to reading!!!!!!!!!!!!! That cliffie about Snape collapsing was very dramatic! Well done!
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  • From ANON - angel on April 29, 2005
    I like it a lot . I can't wait to read what happens next . I hope you update soon .
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  • From ANON - catpower on April 29, 2005
    Liking it so far and hoping you write more soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 27, 2005
    Good job so far! I can't wait to read what happens next, update soon! ~Joani
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  • From ANON - BertMC on April 26, 2005
    It seems to be rolling very well, update soon Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Golden on April 26, 2005
    Oh, Brilliant! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - fraser on April 26, 2005
    aww its a cliffhanger, thats not nice
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  • From ANON - GrammarChick on April 25, 2005
    Your story has possibilities, but your grammar really needs to improve. There are very basic errors, making the story unpleasant to read. Please find a good beta.
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  • From ANON - valady on April 25, 2005
    So far so good....keep it going.


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  • From ANON - lovethelab on April 25, 2005
    I want to know what happened to Snape - is he alright? Will Harry and Hermione have to spend the rest of the holiday at Hogwarts? How will Hermione try to include Snape in their merry making?
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