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Reviews for Training

By : stonemaiden
  • From hotgoose on September 04, 2009
    hot and really interesting, please update soon.
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  • From StrikerXF35 on March 08, 2008
    I must be a pervert... I LOVE this story, and I cant wait till you continue it... please Please PLEASE????
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 11, 2006
    Please continue. I'd like to see where this is going!
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  • From ANON - JW on June 21, 2006
    Update, please?
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  • From ANON - kelvin on July 04, 2005
    This is really good. the fact you made it a ofc does get rid of the problems of having chacacter created before and thus saving you from being occ. please continue to write more.
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  • From ANON - JW on May 23, 2005
    It's May 23, 2005 - where's Chapter 8, please????? (hopeful reader begs)
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  • From ANON - anonymous on May 05, 2005
    POST MORE!

    (er, please...?)

    *puppy eyes*
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  • From stonemaiden on May 02, 2005
    JW - I was actually hoping for that reaction to chapter 7! It was pretty much the most sadistic thing I could think of and I wanted Lucius to come across as this kind of repressed aristocrat who takes out all his secret sexual agression on Scarlett in the form of fetish-type-things. So yeah, pretty much I just wanted him to seem a little weird.

    But never fear; Luci has it coming.

    *evilgrin*

    -Petra
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  • From ANON - JW on May 02, 2005
    Ch 7 - ?? So Lucius had her drink her own milk? Wonder why.... "she'd hated him in school, and she hated him now" - good, that's the spirit! Nice to see that she still has a bit of her old self. Thanks for the promise about the "twist-ending" coming and the "Hogwarts professor" - now I can relax a bit when I read the chapters, instead of getting all nervous about when Lucius is going to kill her. 'Cuz it's obvious that Lucius won't let her live long enough to grow old - ooh, I hope you have a fitting end for him and Draco! Thanks for the new chapters.
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  • From stonemaiden on May 01, 2005
    First off, thank you to everyone who has reviewed. Your comments mean so much to me; I like to use feedback to make the story better.

    Black_lust_z - You're right, I definitely tried to put a different spin on Lucius. I always envisioned him being very paternal and manipulative more so than cruel without reason. Of course, my OFC is a pureblood, so that affects the way he treats her.

    JW - Scarlett is smart, but even smarts can't overcome emotions. Right now, she's "under Lucius's spell" so to speak - which is to say, he holds quite a bit of power over her, physically and mentally. She thinks that she needs him, so she won't be scurrying off any time soon. But don't worry, I have a nice little twist-ending in mind - featuring a Hogwarts professor no less.

    Stratyllis - I completely agree that neither Hermione nor Ginny would fit in this fic; if there's one thing I can't stand, it's canon characters out of character. (odd as that sounds.) At any rate, I'm very glad you like it!

    Thanks again to you all!

    -Petra
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  • From ANON - Stratyllis on May 01, 2005
    I really like this fic. It is very well written. I like that you are using a OFC rather than someone from the books. I couldn't see Hermione or Ginny as the slave in this fic without either of them being horribly OOC. Well done.
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  • From ANON - anon on April 29, 2005
    Love this fic! More please! Enjoying the OFC as well.... :)
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  • From ANON - JW on April 29, 2005
    Ch 1-4 - interesting.... Will she eventually escape and regain her freedom, maybe kill Lucius on the way out? She is a Gryffindor and very smart, after all.
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  • From ANON - Black_lust_z on April 29, 2005
    An interesting fic, definitely a bit different on the take of Lucius...we
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