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Reviews for Harry Hunting

By : Phorcys
  • From ANON - Tes on October 30, 2016

    Tes
    YAY!  So glad I found this story again.  I was worried it was taken down.  I wish you'd continue it, but if not, that's fine.  It is still awesome.  Loved the original idea.


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  • From ANON - preston on November 07, 2006
    goddame it the story is fine but let them fuck!!!!!!!!!
    ps love the whole steve erwin /fate thing

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  • From ANON - SilkNSatin on July 12, 2006
    I love it I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Kirsten on December 14, 2005
    HI! This is your beta "from the past". Please e-mail me ASAP so I can help you. kirsten56@lycos.com
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  • From ANON - Katelynxm on November 23, 2005
    Oh, yes! Your continuing with this! I am sooooo happy, i think this story is hilarious! I loved the threats...mcgonagalls tampon...nothing is worth that...

    Is the chairman Snape? 'Cause it sounded the Ravenclaw hit someone's groin, so I would assume that someone would be a man.... any suggestions..ummm, that anyone except Ginny gets harry. Me no likey Ginny. *boos HBP Harry/Ginny relationship*

    Someone plans a detention with Harry and then knocks out the teacher?


    Trail of jellybeans?


    Someone purposefully has Harry injure them during quidditch or dueling practice so that he would help them or stay by their bedside 'all night long'?


    Someone engorgio's certainparts of themselves in order to gain Harry's attention?


    Someone becomes an unregistered animagus and becomes Harry's new pet (does this in secret and doesn't tell the G.S.S so that he/she can have many weeks to study Harry.)

    Don't have to use them...can't wait fo rthe next update..and remember have fun writing!


    -XM



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  • From ANON - RandH4ever on November 23, 2005
    Hi! My e-mail address is above. Contact me ASAP so I can help you!
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  • From ANON - LRnd on October 16, 2005
    THIS has been ABSOLUT Hilariouosness ... Please PrettyPlease with Naked sexy people on top?
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  • From ANON - RandH4ever on October 02, 2005
    VERY GOOD!! There are still some typos, though. If you would like me to continue beta-ing this story (and make more corrections on what is here) e-mail me ASAP!
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  • From Bargle5 on October 02, 2005
    Enjoying the story very much. I hope you will continue it.

    Now for some practical writing remarks. I think you need a second beta. There are still spelling and punctuation errors showing up. I know it's hard to get them all, but I think you can do better. I try to get two on my own stories, as one often catches something the other misses. I would be willing to do it on this story, if a 2-3 day turn around time is good for you. Shoot me an e-mail if you'd like for me to have a go at it.
    Also, what word processing program are you composing in? It's really messing up your line breaks, making the story more difficult to read. Some readers are really put off by this kind of thing (as well as spelling/punctuation problems) and you don't want people avoiding your story for that reason. Please understand this isn't meant in a mean way, but just pointing out some problems.

    Hoping for more, soon. :-)
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  • From OnlyInThisLight on August 09, 2005
    pleez write more and email me when you post the next chapter! i love this one, funny, sexy, smart and interseting its perfect!
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  • From ANON - Kai on July 18, 2005
    HAHAHAHAH!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!
    IT"S AWESOME!!!!!!!
    LOVE YA!!!!!!!
    Kai
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  • From Elizabeth777 on June 11, 2005
    *giggles insanely before falling over and down right laughing*

    OMFG...I CAN'T BREATH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - dragon34 on May 24, 2005
    Please let Pansy have another go, I really love Harry/Pansy pairings. Maybe she could get him, by being herself.
    She could grab him up again, maybe after supper, and have an all night snog session.

    I actually thought it was Hermione at the beginning of the last chapter.
    I was very disturbed when it was Vincents turn, him ad Crabb just sick me out.

    Maybe you could come up with another story with same idea, but have it for Draco, or Ron. This one is hilarious, I liked the Steve Irwin, it was too cute.
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  • From ANON - RandH4ever on May 23, 2005
    Looks great! Thank you for mentioning me in you A/N. KEEP WRITING!
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on May 14, 2005
    I found the Mr. Spanky comment to be most amusing, also "future monkey sex puppet'. You go, 'kay? I like that you're using more than the usual suspects in your fic, finding out who it is this time is definitely part of the fun.
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