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By : Dhvana
  • From ANON - Luca on September 05, 2005
    That was utterly beautiful. Well written, excellent pov and it just exuded so much raw emotion.

    You werite very well. You should have gotten more reviews. Just because there was no descriptive smut
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  • From ANON - Bounce Ko on May 21, 2005
    An excellent fic, though I wish there had been a little less "telling" and more "showing." It's more effective in storytelling to show a character's rage through their actions and throughts than to say, "He was angry." Still, the little details of everyday life you included go a long way towards remedying this problem. Are you going to write another chapter? It isn't necessary, but I would love to read it.
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  • From ANON - Pixagi on May 12, 2005
    Wow, this is so beautiful. Your writing is so incredibly beutiful. So far, this story is my favorite.
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  • From ANON - Reyna on May 04, 2005
    this is an awesome story!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 04, 2005
    Holy moly! Did he come home to die? He finally tells Draco he loves him and Draco knows they are going to die. I can't wait for chapter 2!
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