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By : SiriuslySevered
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 08, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 11, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From ANON - Snapeluvah on December 31, 2005
    This is very good, but on the 'No Place Like Home' spell, is'nt it supposed to be three clicks of the heel? I think you shuold watch 'The Wizard of Oz' again sometime soon. Other than that, this is a very good read.
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  • From ANON - Denise on December 29, 2005
    i like the story. a very funny relaxed story....i think that you should write a prequel of sorts to show HOW snape ever fell in love with hermione in her 7th year......the only thing i have to complain about is that the characters are all OOC....but ohter than that, great story!
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  • From SataiDelenn on November 22, 2005
    Review Chapter 2....



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  • From ANON - ezw on August 28, 2005
    Over? Come on! How about a final prank at the staff meeting?
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  • From ANON - writerlady on August 26, 2005
    Light and funny. I alway knew he was a softy underneath!
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  • From ANON - SiriuslySevered on August 25, 2005
    I do appreciate the effort it took you to write a bit more than "This story sucks!"

    You review just made my day better (And I'm serious). Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2005
    You are absolutely correct. I have looked up pedantic at Webster's and my recall of the words meaning is not precisly what I thought it was. Thank you for that oversight in my memory. I went to the thesaurus, and have decided that "puerile " would be an excellent replacement word.

    Also, as far as giving specific editorial type feedback as to why I didn't like the story, I tend not to do that any more. Such time and investment is generally not worth it, and is ignored just as much as pithy statements (minus embarrassing wrong word usage) stating my dislike. Hey, at least I don't just write "This story sucks!". Be content in the fact that you have plenty of reviews that tell you how wonderful you are, and relegate my review to the pile the holds the unexplainable anomilies that occur in life.
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  • From SiriuslySevered on August 24, 2005
    P.S. You DO realize that the word "pedantic" would sorta contradict that "6th grade girl" insult, right?
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  • From SiriuslySevered on August 24, 2005
    While I don't mind criticism, it would be helpful if you could leave a comment as to why it's pedantic drivel, so I can improve my writing in the future.

    Much obliged.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2005
    I didn't realize they let 6th grade girls post stories here? What a load of pedantic drivel.
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  • From ANON - D on June 12, 2005
    I think this story is getting good and can wait to see what happens next.

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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on June 12, 2005
    What exactly did Severus do?

    But great chapter and i look forward to the next one!
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