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Reviews for Veela Inheritance Problems

By : Sakya
  • From ANON - Aytrix on December 08, 2015
    This is beautiful written, I wish there was more to read. I hope you update again soon, I've re-read this story again and again.
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  • From JuliaOS13 on April 10, 2013
    I love this story I wish that you would continue it!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - reutavioz on August 17, 2012
    this is a great story, with an amazing plot.

    i first read it a few years back, and i find myself going back to it every few months...

    i'm really sad you abandoned it and i hope to see a pm one day or an alert that says there's an update for the story..

    you're very talented and i hope to hear from you one day..as a fic writer and original pieces writer..your talent shouldn't go to waste..

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  • From newteza1 on January 25, 2012
    WOWOWOW, I just found your story yesterday and couldn't stop reading... no sleep last night and work today (((
    I have to say it is one of the best stories I have read and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
    Thank you soo much for sharing it with us!
    newteza
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  • From Morales89 on January 12, 2012
    I like Veela stories, but I strongly dislike Veela stories that start out as a practical rape scene. It's just not sexy for most of their first time to be Harry begging Draco not to touch him. Also, Harry seems horrifically out of character. I mean, if he could get himself out of all the situations he did growing up at Hogwarts, surely he could've avoided getting Mated if he didn't want to. The entire situation just feels wrong when you read it.

    Don't get me wrong, there are Veela stories that I love that make it work somehow, but this one just kind of got progressively less believable as it went on. Harry Potter would never allow anyone to put him in a situation that he disliked. And the fact that he and Draco go from enemies to mated right away without any transition is part of the reason the story as a whole just doesn't sit well.

    It was like chapter 1 Harry is barely made aware of what's going on and them bam! Chapter 2 he's mated to Draco Malfoy very much against his will and he even says "he could live with it" which just makes the situation even less desirable to read.

    I really don't want this to be a flame because you're very good with imagery and grammar, and your ideas are innovative and original. They just didn't sit well with me, and I felt I needed to point out the huge issue with characterization in this story.
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  • From sevNlilforever on September 15, 2011
    OMG! Sakya! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! YOU MUST MUST MUST FINISH IT!!! If you ever need a beta PLEASE let me know! I'D love to help you out! (no offense, but there were a few mistakes in grammer that were probably the result of a faulty spell checker, Didn't stop me from loving the story though!) I love the elaborate society you've created for the veela! and giving Harry a brand new set of family was absolutely the sweetest thing that could ever be done for a character so great! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish this fic! I'M dying of fanfic blue-balls!

    Please Email me! Maplephlip08@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2011
    awwww u ave taken another long break hope u continue ..looks up with big brown puppy eyes....please finish story want to c wat revenge they can possibly melt out plus wanna c harry's reaction if and wen he finds out like dat u gave harry a family loves this story btw ~ mwah
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  • From nekluvshp on February 24, 2011
    Why have you not updated this story for the past three years?? I found it some time ago. I read it and loved it!!! I decided to go searching for it today and was disappointed to see that nothing had been added in all that time. Its a wonderful story and I would love to know what happens next and how it ends.

    ~nekluvshp
    nekluvshp@hotmail.com
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  • From Chavela25 on February 07, 2011
    It's really ridiculous that this story has not been updated. I DEMAND AN UPDATE! :P
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  • From Annymagus on November 21, 2010
    Oh! This story is sooo goood!!!! I read a translation years ago, but the other author only wrote 4 chapters. When I found this one, the original, I was so happy!!!! Though, I thought it was complete, what a shame... But I steel love it. Pleas don
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  • From rebekahalana on November 07, 2010
    I found & read this stoy today ... I absolutely love it ! Harry's cute in his naivite & I love seeing him come to trust Draco .
    I like that you have given him a family with believable reasons for not finding Harry before now .
    I really want to see what Sirius , Snape , & the Malfoys come up with to torture the Dursleys . XD
    Do you have a list of people who get notified of updates ? If so could you add me to it ?
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  • From gingerzrule2788 on August 31, 2010
    im lovin this story, could you please add me to your update list. thanks.

    gingerz rule
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on July 16, 2010
    i love this freaking story and i wait on pins and needles for you to update so please don't make me wait long..they hurt....lol..but please please please please please update this story.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on January 22, 2010
    aww i had thought that this was finished. it really is rather interesting! i like that harry is a veela too. and that he isn't just some little wimp. i can't wait to see what the malfoys and sirius and remus think up. *evil giggle* please please update soon
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  • From RedEntrapy on January 17, 2010
    This has been my all time favorite fic for a couple of years now and I have been waiting for an update. Just wondering if you are on hiatus or not...? My e-mail is eliseloring151@hotmail.com
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