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Reviews for Veela Inheritance Problems

By : Sakya
  • From ANON - Draeconin on March 05, 2006
    'Severus' - not 'Serverus'

    'dining room' - not 'dinning room'

    But as a story, this is very well done. A beta with good English skills could help, but I am hoping that there will be another installment of your story, soon.
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  • From ANON - Tobby on February 13, 2006
    Thank you very much for telling me that you update and what a wonderfull chapter ! I loved it, but it's so sad that you update not so much !! Your story is really appreciated ! Well i think that all of us, you too have a life lol !
    Well juste to say that your chapter was really good, even for french like me, i understand very well !! This story is one of the best on veela you should know that and i have read a lot french and english one !! I hope you will continue on this way or better (but i don't think it's possible !!) !
    Thank you !
    Tobby
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  • From ANON - gndmlvr01 on February 12, 2006
    The fic is wonderful. I love mating fics.
    Are you going to continue it? If so, please notify me when you next update!
    Thank you for the story!!
    --gndmlvr01
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  • From ANON - gndmlvr01 on February 12, 2006
    The fic is wonderful. I love mating fics.
    Are you going to continue it? If so, please notify me when you next update!
    Thank you for the story!!
    --gndmlvr01
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  • From ANON - Bulisen on February 11, 2006
    Wow! This is absolutly amazing! The plot is truly orignal! I read veela and other magical creature stories more than anyone I know, I'm a bit addicted actully, and I've never read such an original plot! I would greatly appriciatr it if you could send me a mail when you update:) This site really needs too get an alertsystem!
    /Mimmi
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  • From Zuzanny on February 11, 2006
    Where is the rest of this fic, HMMMMMMM? I know I must say that a lot, but it is because I really enjoyed this story and WANT MORE NOW DAMMIT!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - PJ on February 06, 2006
    This is such a great story I look forward to more updates. I do hope that Harry will put his foot down when Molly shows up and makes sure she stays in charge of being his "shadow" and not let Malfoy have everything his way by letting his cousin take charge. Can't have Draco think he is going to get his way all the time. Harry really needs to take time and learn about things. Anyway keep writing and when you can post again I look forward to the next chapters. Thx for posting!!!
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  • From thuyhy on February 06, 2006
    oh , I like the malfoys in this story , ^^ this's just wonderful , update soon , neh LOL
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  • From ANON - Amessis on February 06, 2006
    Loved it! Pansy is so delusional if she thinks she would marry Draco without Harry around, As if Narcissa would allow it!
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  • From ANON - Shtoofi on February 05, 2006
    That was a great chapter, I'm glad that you finally updated... I must say that I am very much looking forward to the dancing lessons, and to a lot more Harry/Draco action as that is just so much fun to read. I love that this story has a refreshing twist, and I can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - momoko on February 05, 2006
    good story, bye
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  • From ANON - Rosencoff on February 05, 2006
    OMG! This is such an awsome story. It just kinda sucks that there are only 8 chapters. ;.; I was so into it and then like.. it stopped. XD Haha, I hope Pasy doesn't do anything too stupid. I mean, the doms can get away with stuff, but I don't think the subs can. Or am I wrong? o.o; Haha, I might have missed that part. Anyways, I'll be obnoxiously waiting for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Banner on February 05, 2006
    This is fun!
    I'm really enjoying Harry's confusion and the way Draco's changed to suit his mate.
    The only problem is, how will Harry defeat the Dark Lord when he's pregnant? Or when he has to care for a toddler. Trust me, being a mother is a far-more-than-full-time job for several years. There's a reason that women traditionally aren't soldiers, and did not accompany their men to war. Modern women can prevent an inconvenient pregnancy - it doesn't have to negate all her plans for the rest of her life. It sounds as if Harry is going to be pregnant as soon as he graduates this year. I guess he's no longer the One Who Might Defeat Voldemort.
    Is Neville actually going to be the Chosen One now?
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  • From ANON - Yana on February 05, 2006
    whens the wedding
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  • From ANON - Yana on February 05, 2006
    cool chappy
    i loved it
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