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Reviews for Veela Inheritance Problems

By : Sakya
  • From ANON - oneeyejane on June 13, 2005
    I love the story and have know problems with it. But i do have a problem with is the way yo ended Heir of light, Heir of darkness. You sayed that you were going to have a Sex part and we only saw a part before you ended it. i think it could have been longer and a i think that you sould work on your sex parts. At least for that story.

    And plesae go back and do somthing with that story if you can so this Veela story you can finsh the heir story and do it right. i'm not yelling at you i just do not like to get into a story a have it be a let down.

    With love for your writhing BYe.

    P.S. i love this story so for don't let this be a let down to.
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  • From ANON - Aline Potter on June 13, 2005
    Oi!!!!Ent
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  • From ANON - princessmanda on June 13, 2005
    It's called a boat-neck shirt in America, trust me, I took a fashion designing class.
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  • From ANON - Anyanka on June 13, 2005
    I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1Please update soon, can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love
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  • From ANON - sethian on June 13, 2005
    Hey thanks for updating, this chapter was awesome, I really love this story of yours :)

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  • From ANON - Serpenteyes on June 13, 2005
    Interesting... Most authors have Harry as the dominant one in Harry/Draco veela fic, but I like your writing. Can't wait for the smut to happen! ^___^
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  • From ANON - Yana on June 13, 2005
    hahahahaha poor harry
    how are you going to get rid of him
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  • From ANON - acr on June 13, 2005
    I think this fic is getting better and better. I'm definitely interested in seeing Harry interact with some of the other veela. I was amazed to learn that English isn't your first language! You write it very well.
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  • From ANON - Lady X on June 13, 2005
    posessiveness is so sexy. Can't wait to get more slashy goodness and I have a VERY bad feeling about Ivanoff he is gonna cause some big problems soon I would bet on it.
    Lady X
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  • From ANON - sbkar on June 13, 2005

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  • From ANON - Agnieszka Tale on June 13, 2005
    What an interesting story! I really, really liked it. Hope you post more of it soon!
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  • From ANON - Kitty on June 13, 2005
    Ooh! I can almost feel the tension building! Well, Harry did say he would fight Draco every step of the way didn't he? Now this is he chance. Poor Draco, he doesn't know what he's let himself in for!

    P.s. One chap a week?! That's great! better than the other works I'm reading. I'm now gonna get a regular supply of Draco/Harry love! *does happy little jig*
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  • From ANON - Demon on June 13, 2005
    this is really good and thanks for the long chapter i can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Missi on June 13, 2005

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  • From ANON - gd on June 13, 2005
    update update update
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