Adult-FanFiction.org : Harry Potter

Reviews for Veela Inheritance Problems

By : Sakya

From ANON - Pete on May 26, 2005
I like it very much! Lots of unexpected events...keep going! Thanks, Pete
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From ANON - sharon on May 26, 2005
just amazed how many reviews you have gotten on this story so far. I begin to see that giving you reviews arent really that helpful anyway when you dont seem to listen to what the readers are trying to tell you. You have a hit here and Im sure that other authors would just love to have thought of a story that got this many reviews and would have probably made this a priority write against other stories just because they could see that this one is right on the money as to what the readers are looking for which is a unique story form. I think its great to try to tell the authors fluff to boast their egos but I sure wish your other readers would get it clear that you arent committed to this story and in your own words have shown little interests in this story by the time you got to the third chapter, just when things were beginning to happen in the story. I hope you dont feel like I enjoy giving you negative words but in this world i have found that to be committed to a thing makes a timely update, happy readers and a author who knows where she is from moment to moment and not taking on too many things to the point that nothing is really getting accomplished.
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From ANON - sharon on May 25, 2005
I can only hope that perhaps another more dedicated writer will take over this wonderful plot and really give us some real writing with some dedication and some regular updates.
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From on May 24, 2005
Hey, this is fun! thank you, i'll look out for an update!
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From ANON - Demon on May 24, 2005
this is really really good and i can't wait for the next chapter
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From ANON - Huiaki on May 24, 2005
Mwahaha! Ron not flipping out? This must be the end of the world. ;) Quite cute.
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From ANON - Ianthe on May 23, 2005
Great! Poor Harry
Mmmm. He is going to know how is that he was 'mated' with Malfoy? He is going to be very happy, I think. Please, update soon!
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From ANON - Inuyisha on May 23, 2005
That's it...*sniffles...starts crying*

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From ANON - CJ on May 22, 2005
This is a great story and i was wondering when you were going to up-date it keep up the great writting

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From ANON - JJ on May 19, 2005
I'm really enjoying your story! More fluff than angst for a change - a nice change. That Lucius and Zabinni would change sides so easily was surprising, but I really thought that comment about Hogwarts grooming Snape as the next headmaster was a riot! I'm enjoying a nice Draco for a change and I can't wait to see how Harry reacts.
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From ANON - Gothic Angel on May 19, 2005
That was such a teaser I really want more harry/draco ! lol the chapter was good ...explained the concept of sub. dom. well i hope u update soon not like last time that was way too long lol thx
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From ANON - anonymous on May 19, 2005
Can't wait to read more!! please update soon!
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From ANON - amethyst on May 19, 2005
intresting chapter I have more questions. what is displaying?
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From ANON - lacquer on May 19, 2005
I'm very,very,very glad you updated. Will Harry fight Draco after he regains his senses??

Good work! Should I still say "more!! more!!! more!!!" ?
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From ANON - sethian on May 19, 2005
This story is ssooo good! God I love it ^.^ update soon :)
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