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Reviews for Veela Inheritance Problems

By : Sakya
  • From ANON - Laitaine on May 19, 2005
    You write so well! At least I haven't noticed any grammatical problems, but that might be because english is not my first language. The story is wonderful and interesting. I like everything about it... The fact that the pureblood families have loyalties only to themselves - it'll be nice to see family interaction with the Malfoy's in the later chapters... And the characters are potrayed so well! I feel sorry for Harry tough, being all confused and not knowing what's going on... Draco is so sweet (to him), I love it. Pansy is potrayed well... While I like to see some jealous action from the other suitors, it's all the better to see the characters acting logically - in the way that fits to the potrait painted on them in the story. You have managed that so well! Also, your Ron and Hermione are quite balanced - no clich
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  • From ANON - Yana on May 19, 2005
    so has Blaise given up
    lol
    not much of a fight he put up
    lol
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 19, 2005
    Harry is still in deniel! But he's been claimed. What is Pansy going to do? Who is she going to talk to? I feel trouble is coming for Harry and Draco. Can't wait for chapter 5!
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  • From ANON - fragonknight01 on May 19, 2005
    That was a lovely chapter. That stroll was so well worded that I didn't even realize they were speaking about DE activity until you explained it,,,duh!
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  • From ANON - elecktra on May 19, 2005
    I love it!! Your doing a great job!! I sooo can't wait to find out what happens next!! So please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Kat Potter on May 19, 2005
    Can't wait for more! plz update soon!
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  • From ANON - foxfire on May 19, 2005
    "OMG!! yay, she up dated!!" *tackles* "i love your storie, its very good!! keep up the good work!!" *runs away*
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  • From ANON - sbkar on May 19, 2005
    Twitter!!!! Yep, I had to at the last lines... Oh what has Harry done? Better, what will Harry do? And, only you, kind author, can answer that question...
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  • From ANON - anon on May 19, 2005
    ?????
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  • From ANON - Eddie The Black Maru on May 19, 2005
    Oh my fucking GOD that was HOT! more PLEASE!
    Much Love
    Eddie
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  • From Reyn on May 19, 2005
    I'm sorry to say the whole 'peaceful resolve' bit between the Zambinis and the Malfoys still has me confused. But I still like this story ^_^
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  • From ANON - fraser on May 19, 2005
    I LOVE it already, i can't wait for the next chappie
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on May 18, 2005
    Can't wait to read harry's reaction!
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  • From ANON - Missi on May 18, 2005
    *bows head* please more? *jumping excitedly* I LOVE DRACO VEELA/HARRY SUB SLASH! You totally rock, by the way. This story's amazing!
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  • From ANON - Storm on May 18, 2005
    I hope you update to the next chapter more quickly than with this one. I can't wait to see what happens when Harry is feeling up to a 'discussion' with Draco. Keep up the good work
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