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Reviews for Veela Inheritance Problems

By : Sakya
  • From ANON - DarkQueen on May 09, 2005
    Ok I
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  • From ANON - nina on May 09, 2005
    great story!!! love it very much
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  • From ANON - PrphtssP on May 09, 2005
    Eek! A Potter and a Malfoy. What a match that shall be. I can only imagine the terror they shall cause in the community.
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  • From Reyn on May 09, 2005
    i like how you have their instincts take over as a way of explaining Harry's struggles and surrender. It makes it much better than jest reading about a feeble fight and then the 'lust' becoming too much and giving in like a common whore. Excellent job. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Storm on May 09, 2005
    Wow! I like this story more with each word you write. I love the fight to prove Draco's worth. It was great. I can't wait to read the next chapter and the intro of Harry being Draco's mate to everybody else.
    Great Job!
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  • From ANON - Phorcys on May 09, 2005
    Awww no naked Veela mud pit, but Draco Harry action is good also. So Harry is the sub and can become pregnant what could his reaction be. Great Chapter.
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  • From ANON - amethyst on May 09, 2005
    I am a bit sad to hear the story going to be short. it's very intresting. i am hoping maybe where will be a sequal. when did the weasleys stop being invited why did ron not mention harry's smell to him before? why does harry want a dominate?
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 09, 2005
    Yep! I'm at ForeverFandom, TheSilverSnitch and here. The only three places I read! I adore this story! Was sooo excited to see another chapter! Hurry with chapter 4! Harry's scent changed? Because he's been mated or pregnant? Can't wait for more! Way to go Draco!
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  • From ANON - Echo on May 09, 2005
    I love veela fics! This one is definitely interesting. Please update soon!
    Btw, caught a few errors ... the one that stuck in my mind was in chpt 1 where "costume" should have been "custom"
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  • From ANON - janet on May 09, 2005
    Oh my harry has been claimed!!!! I wonder how de other domi veela will react to this and hmmm what is the two father planning......
    How will harry react to being claimed and how will his friends react....and how will draco treat harry.....
    so many question that only u can answer them!!!

    update soon
    great chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Wildfire on May 09, 2005
    hmm I get the feeling that the other mates arn't going to like it that Draco got Harry. Draco has to be able to protect Harry? that was an intersting part, is Harry going to be attacked by the other mates? Or was it jsut in general?

    Wildfire
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  • From ANON - Akume on May 09, 2005
    Wow that was fast. Anyway, there were a few mispelled words here and there, but nothing that would deter from the overall enjoyment of the fic. This chapter could have done with a more descriptive lemon though. Perhaps, you can endulge me next time. Well, keep up the good work. Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Natasha on May 09, 2005
    I really enjoy the story but I'm little confused, is everyone in the story part-veela and need to have a mate or only a select few. Was Harry right in his mind when he mated with Draco? Or was it their hormones in control? I thought it was alittle fast how they got in bed and ended up mating. Also is Harry really a submissive? And if he is, does that mean he can get pregnant? I'm sorry if these are questions you all ready answered but I really want to know the answers.
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  • From ANON - Tarra on May 08, 2005
    Yaaaa! Squeeeee! Please say this isn't the last chapter! I wanna know more! (not to mention more hot man-smut!)
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  • From ANON - anjelic on May 08, 2005
    Good chapter....I liked that you didn't have Harry give up too easily. Only thing I noticed was that the word "mate" was used alot...not that it particularly matters or bothered me. It's just something i noticed in one of the paragraphs towards the end. Again very nice chapter!
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