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Reviews for Veela Inheritance Problems

By : Sakya
  • From ANON - fragonknight01 on May 06, 2005
    Absolutely brilliant so far. Quite excited to read chapter 2 so please post soon.

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  • From zentiis on May 06, 2005
    love it! i'm sooooo anticipating many an amusing moment. The image of malfoy and the other purebloods sprinting off to the forest for the perfect mate *cough*harry*cough* was amusing indeed!
    Great work! i really look forward to your next update ^_^
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  • From ANON - Phorcys on May 06, 2005
    This is a good start I like the twist on the Veela bonding plot, it's interesting. I hope you keep writting.
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  • From ANON - Alexa on May 06, 2005
    Oh this is so promicing. And what it promices is a lot of fun!
    I'd love to see them fight, and the impression on Harry's face while they fight!
    You write very well :-)
    More! And SOON PLEASE!!!
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  • From lojenn on May 06, 2005
    Oh! Sarryn offered to beta! Grab that offer up quick, friend, for sarryn is quite the artist with words!
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  • From lojenn on May 06, 2005
    Interesting story you've started. I'm anxious to see where it goes. Constructive Critisism: There are quite a few mispellings, past/present tense mix ups, grammatical errors and wrong words. I would get a beta to proof read before you post because these errors really detract from your story which is truly a shame.

    Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope we get to see a fight between the dominants! ^_~
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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on May 06, 2005
    okay.... where is it? *looks around author* where is the next chappie?!?!? *pokes author* i know you have it! now give it to me!! *pouts* please!?!
    basically what i'm saying is... GREAT START! UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 06, 2005
    I was soooo hoping to find the next chapter! Need chapter 2!
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  • From ANON - MidniteStar on May 06, 2005
    wow...it's very interesting so far...i can't wait for the next chapter
    ~MS
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  • From Reyn on May 06, 2005
    Best line:

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  • From Sarryn on May 06, 2005
    This sounds extremely provocative. I would, though, recommend a Beta to polish up the rough spots (commas before the end-quotation mark in dialogue, parallelism, syntactical clarity, etc.) and would be more than willing to offer my services. Leave an email if you
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  • From ANON - Lady Yaoi on May 06, 2005
    For the love all that is D/H shipping and yaoi update this fic!
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  • From ANON - danni on May 06, 2005
    I am new to slash fanfiction and haven't read any harry-potter books so i dont even know what a veela is. My sister had this story up and now i am going to be a very faitful reader I hope you update this and soon it is very interesting
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  • From ANON - lacquer on May 06, 2005
    Oh and I forgot..... Wrong spelling, maybe a typo? Zabini, not Zabiny....
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on May 05, 2005
    Can't wait to read more. Love veela stories.
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