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By : taniazed
  • From ANON - Kalisin on May 06, 2005
    i'm excited about this idea! please update soon!

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  • From ANON - Shame Ness on May 06, 2005
    It sounds interesting, but the bet thing is what will really set the story, seeing as it is centered on this, correct? If not then I must have misread something. BUt hopefully it will prove to be great.
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  • From ANON - paige on May 06, 2005
    Not a bad start so far. Not that I'm an expert or anything. A Beta is someone who edits your work. I think this site might have a list f them. I'm not overly sure, since I eit my own work. I'd suggest you make your paragraphs a little bit shorter. I know it's hard, but I think it's easier to stay focused when paragraphs are shorter.

    All the best!
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  • From DemonBlaze on May 06, 2005
    the chapter was a great start. cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - Alexa on May 06, 2005
    Great begining!
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on May 06, 2005
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 2! This should be hilarious!
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