Click Here!

Reviews for One Drunken Night

By : sybersnake
  • From ANON - Leila on May 25, 2005
    I am unable to continue reading this. It seems so unlikely that Harry would act that way and there is no chance for a snarry resolution...sorry.


    Report Review

  • From ANON - marie on May 25, 2005
    keep up the good work.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Akane on May 25, 2005
    Hm, sorry, but your story doesn't work for me - when has Harry become this heartless bastard? He isn't anything like the character from the books - way too ooc.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Betty on May 11, 2005
    So exicitng for HP and so cruel for SS. I like it! Looking forward to late chapters and the next morning!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Raven Potter-Snape on May 11, 2005
    Mmmm, I really like this. Update soon please and when you do inform me.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - antipyro on May 10, 2005
    Wow! I don't know what to say. Seems kinda brutal, but Hey, I read it anyways. Is this going to be a love story or a sadistic, manipulating, dominant Harry story? The story description was rather vague.

    I can't get if Harry was so inebriated that he could overpower Severus, when you mentioned that Severus has strong arms? You do mention later that Severus was, what was it, a gentle person?

    Also, I always thought that if a man was drunk, he could get hard, but come????? Harry is really, really virile in this, right????

    Harry has traditionally been slightly shorter than Severus, remember that tall, dark look? Maybe you should try to add a little more description to set the stage. Like when they are walking down the corridor to Harry's rooms, make a mention of their respective heights. I'm not criticizing, just mentioning it.

    The story is fast and quick. I hope that this first chapter is different than all the rest. I don't mind short chapters, well, not tooooo short, but this could have been just a tad longer.

    Your writing is good and the plot is fairly unique. I've only ever read one other Harry gets drunk story, but it was a different idea altogether.

    Keep writing, I'd like to know what kind of turns your story takes after this.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - nesscafe on May 10, 2005
    Wow! YIKES! Poor Snape! I've recently started reading Snarry, so this is a new twist for me. I can't even begin to imagine how poor Snape is going to feel in the morning. Harry could be sent to Azkaban for this. Good grief! You've got your work cut out for you if this is a romance.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!