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By : silvernatasha
  • From ANON - sassyspicegurrl on November 04, 2005
    that was beautiful. sad, but beautiful. i wish i could write that passionately--without seeming to. i don't know what to call it except beautiful
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  • From ANON - lazy on May 27, 2005
    wow. yay!
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  • From ANON - jenny on May 21, 2005
    you should continue this, make them start to like each other. it's such a good story, i just want to read more.
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  • From ANON - JW on May 17, 2005
    Well-written - good job! They should just use a fertility potion or spell so that she can get pregnant, then they won't need to have sex again until after the baby is born and they need to produce the next kid.
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  • From ANON - deedee on May 14, 2005
    i really liked it!!!!
    i think u should turn this into a longer fic. It's got lots of potienal.
    To tell u the truth, i don't think there are enough marriage law stories out there (well good ones i mean :P).

    If u decide to do it. I have an idea, if you'd like.
    They could keep trying to make a baby, but haven't got there yet.
    Then the law is over turned. By that time, they have fallen in love.
    But some where in the malfoy marriage code, if they don't get pregnant soon, the marriage is over.
    So they try everything to get pregnant. The ending is up to u.
    It was just a though :)
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  • From ANON - nique on May 13, 2005
    God that's sad.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 13, 2005
    Yes, that WAS v. angsty! A bit confusing, but in that good sort of way. I kept hoping there'd be some bit of happiness in it, but the way you wrote it was carefully done and meaningful. Good job, I enjoyed reading this.
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