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Reviews for Skin

By : foxracerchick129
  • From ANON - akinaria on January 25, 2006
    Your story was nice, it would have been more interesting if it was longer and more in depth though. Also, it would be good to know what happened to the girl.

    You mentioned in the previous chapter that Albus retired three years ago, then you had him sitting at the Head Table for the ball. This needs an explanation because as it stands it looks like a plot error. I did this once, killed off three people and then had them ushering people into the castle three chapters later. Easily done, especially if you are writing more than one fic. Just thought I's mention it.
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  • From ANON - some chick on November 20, 2005
    two things. one: harry and snape's "angel" is a icky mary sue. two: okay do you like when you're parents make out in front of you??? why would harry's kids like it? sure they were like get a room, but who says "that would be hot if you weren't my parents"??? ewe. oh and there was a typo with 'hot'.
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  • From Nigelsfairymidwife on June 28, 2005
    I liked this alot. As a parent, it really hit me when I read of parents dealing with the helplessness of going through a child's illness. Brought a tear to my eye and I had to go look in on both of my daughters and sneak a hug while they slept.
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  • From moonstonemystyk on June 24, 2005
    Very sweet.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on June 21, 2005
    Thanks for a lovely ending. Hopefully Sarah-Beth's treatment are successful and her and William get married, being first loves. Ahhh...*sighs*

    Congratulations on making it out of school, you know the learning never ends.....

    Now, go finish all those other fics you started and I bookmarked so I can read them

    You're right, the song went well with how you wrote it.

    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Hambares on June 21, 2005
    Thanx for not killing off anyone! I think Williamina is perfect
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  • From ANON - Eowynselixure on June 21, 2005
    V.good I thought it was SOO sweet the way william had shaved his hair off!

    *Eowyns elixure
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  • From ANON - miststalker on June 21, 2005
    That was very well done, usually I don't like song fics because either a: the song doesn't fit the story, or b: the song interrupts the flow of the story so much that you can't enjoy the story itself. Once again well done.
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  • From ANON - sweetteetwo on May 19, 2005
    I don't normally read sad fics but what I read so far is good
    I can't wait for the next chapter.I hope it will be posted soon.
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 15, 2005
    I really love this story for the family ties that you're developing. One of those feel-good family things.

    Even after 18 years, Harry and Severus still roll around like 'teenagers' in their love making, I just love it! Some more descriptions should be included to spice it up, though.

    Wow, juggling a large family, teaching and being Deputy Headmaster, Severus has his hands full. Great idea that you gave Hermoine for the 6-10 year olds. Will this also include children from muggle families or those who don't really know that they are magical?

    Your writing is good, just a few grammatical errors, but still very much readable. The story line moves well, and although I'd like a slightly slower pace, this is o.k. too.

    Feeding your muse chocolate, sugar quills, fizzing wizzbees and Droobles Best Blowing Gum to make her write and dream up more snarry stuff.

    Please, update soon. I really want to know what happens next.
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  • From ANON - fragonknight01 on May 15, 2005
    How can you be so mean...are you really going to take their angel away? I know you are going to give them another girl but this is just horrible!
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  • From ANON - fragonknight01 on May 15, 2005
    I just love the stories where Sev and Harry are happy with a house full of children.
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