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Reviews for Twisted Games

By : MortalFate
  • From jhannah81095 on February 25, 2011
    please update soon :D
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  • From mrequecky on January 22, 2010
    Oh wow, now he's got to deal with Draco as well... Loved the chap!
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  • From ANON - anon on January 19, 2010
    Your story has a good premise but you really need to get a beta. Or at least start spell-checking your work.

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  • From HeartStar on January 13, 2010
    Wow have you stopped writing this I want to see where you go with this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please...
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 06, 2007
    I like your writing and ideas but i think harry would be more...emotionally scarred than that. he has just been raped after all...still i think you could make a great story out of this, ill read on...
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  • From ANON - Demon on November 26, 2005
    This is a great story and I look foreward to the next chapter ^^
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  • From ANON - B-chan on October 26, 2005
    Interesting story. I'm looking foward to reading more. (hard core H/C snarry fan here!) HOWEVER, a word of advice, B E T A ...find one, or at least use a spell-checker. Also, Jeeves is Peeves (just think "to peeve/peeved" "to annoy/annoyed") Also great sorce of info, www.hp-lexicon.org.
    hope this helps. Happy writing, now I go back to reading. ;-)
    Becca-chan
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  • From ANON - The Dark Child [Am a girl on October 09, 2005
    I LOVE THIS FIC
    YOU GOTTA UPDATE ASP
    GO TO GO THANKS
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  • From ANON - tomarlia on October 08, 2005
    oh my god you must finish this story. unbeliveable.
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  • From ANON - Nightwing on October 07, 2005
    Ironically i actually feel really sorry for draco.... *gives draco a hug*
    I can't wait to read more, and see how the plot thickens!
    Chow for now!
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  • From ANON - Charmingdesires on September 25, 2005
    Good so far now, like the other people said you will keep updating or else. -Shifty eyes- I'll make you pay Potter.
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  • From ANON - red_prince_alexander_pastener on September 25, 2005
    omfr>> Hee-chan>< update>< write more!! Me begging you!!
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  • From ANON - Christina F. on June 29, 2005
    I think I have read this story three times while waiting for you to
    update it very good .
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  • From ANON - dido on May 16, 2005
    So wait. Did I read it wrong? Adair has green eyes and black hair too?
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  • From ANON - antipyro on May 15, 2005
    Great story! I really like it a lot. It has some interesting features in it that make it different. Your imagination is awesome.

    The story has lots of action in it and although the rape scene was brutal, it was well described.

    I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but you should get a Beta to review some grammar and spelling issues. Either that or use spell-check on your word processing software.

    You've made Draco the bad guy here and it's intriguing to see how he handles 'Potter' in this story.

    Severus is quickly falling for Harry, being tender and caring. Sort of gives me that WAFF.

    Please continue writing and posting more of this story, it's really good.
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