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Reviews for Of Snakes and Men

By : bookwyrm378
  • From ANON - moony2 on October 08, 2005
    This is a great fic. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mariana Ulyss on October 08, 2005
    Helo, there!
    I've been addicted to AdultFanFiction.Net for a while (I've already sucked FanFiction.Net dry... T_T), but this is my first review EVER in this site!!!!
    I'd like to say I love your story, but have a few suggestions if you'd care to read them!
    Perhaps, to solve the chapter legth problem, it would be a good idea to go into a little more detail... Not too much, but actualy "show" Voldemort changing things instead of just saying he did afterwards...
    Even if it was a newspaper article, it would not only expose Voldemort's actions more deeply, but also the public's reaction to all these changes...
    Do they know Voldemort is behind it already or not? If so, how was their reaction to this new side of him they'd never seen? If not, how do they feel about the ministry's sudden change in politics? And so on...
    I don't know if I'm being clear... Sometimes I explain too much and people get confused... T_T
    Anyway, I'm only saying all that because you mentioned wanting longer chapters and I believe this would be a nice way of doing it (another would be having more stuff happen in each chapter, thus having more material to work with)! I really like the story so far, though (I can't wait to see Voldemort and Harry meet eachother)!! Congratulations!
    Kisse,
    Mari-chan (aka Kizuki-sama =^.^=)
    P.S.: Could you e-mail me with the updates?
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  • From flameofthenight on October 06, 2005
    ~You've got a good plot. Story needs to be a bit more mature. Take it up a couple of levels reading wise (I don't mean start tossing out sex all over the place I mean take it up to at least 12th grade reading level) Please don't take this the wrong way. You've got some good stuff here and I lool forward to you updating.
    Email: starsong39@msn.com
    ~The Flame Reviews~
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  • From ANON - Aeriem on September 24, 2005
    I've enjoyed your story so far and I'm pactiantly waiting for more. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2005
    Have Lucius Malfoy adopt her and marry her off to Vincent Crabbe-arranged marriage, and she starts hen-peckin over homework now (etc, etc, etc)
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  • From salazarslytherinsnakes on September 17, 2005
    I love this story please update.
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  • From ANON - foxfada on September 15, 2005
    This fic is GOOD.
    I really like your fic!
    I want know the updates PLEASE.
    boyancefoxfada@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - esther on September 10, 2005
    this is a very good story... only a few things...
    1: are you writing this story twice? there are 2 stories with the same title on your 'homepage'.

    the only thing that i can really complain about is that the chapters aren't very long, but i guess that you will fix that once you get into the story a bit more.

    i have to go now.
    take care, and i look forward to another chapter from you.

    Esther
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  • From ANON - anubiset on September 06, 2005
    Please add me to your list. anubiset@sbcglobal.net. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Tori_Chan on September 04, 2005
    I was too lazy to sign on. But I like this story though. I want to read more of it. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Chyna on August 28, 2005
    Okay, i must flame you now....It's a great story!!!! but you little review page is killin me.....bluh....email me when you get the next chapter up....Ty
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  • From ANON - acr on August 21, 2005
    I see you've started reposting this story...I was very dissappointed it wasn't an update. I like the basis of this challenge, but yours is the only good response I've read thus far.
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  • From ANON - Abi on August 20, 2005
    cool ^^ please update soon :D:D ive gottin hooked on harry/voldemort for a while thou u never see enough of those *pout* i like the harry-raised-by-a-snake theme :D could u email me when u update please? thanks :D
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  • From ANON - jess on August 20, 2005
    anyone been reading of mice and men?

    i like snake harry and i like his mother

    voldies plan this time around is much better

    hermione is now on voldamorts side? yay dumbles is going down dumbles is going down (don't like dumbles)
    h/balise (vote)

    is ron a stupid arragent dick? (please please please and have him tourtured)
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  • From ANON - Serenity on August 08, 2005
    Update plzzzzzzzzz update why won't people update this fics!!!!!!!!!!!
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