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Reviews for The Death of a Soul

By : Roedhunt
  • From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2005
    I really like the premise of this story but I have been quite confused by the latest chapters. It seems like there is very little continuity between updates. I'm sure that the mystery is what you're going for, but it just seems a bit spastic. One chapter Snape's abusive, the next he's the concerned but misguided caretaker. And Harry's character is even stranger. I get where you're going, I think, but it seems like rather than the plot having an arch, it zigzags all over the place and the forward motion is waning, so it really does feel slow in addition.

    You are a wonderful writer and I will definitely still be reading and being very grateful that you put out such beautiful stories. It's just that the story felt so mysterious in the beginning, and I loved the way I felt like we got a bit more of the puzzle each chapter. Now I feel like (with the last few chapters) maybe their isn't an elaborate mystery unraveling as much as people just acting bizarrely and without explanation. I'm SURE that there is one, I'd just really like to get some indication of what it is sooner rather than later.

    Your writing style is superb and always a delight to read. I'll look forward to more no matter what.
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  • From ANON - Ox King on December 16, 2005
    I wont be surprised if Harry becomes the next Dark Lord. But first, he would have to kill off the competition. I can just see the recruiting platform. "Imagine a world were there are no more Purebloods left to discriminate. A world were Muggleborns, Halfbloods, Vampires. Werewolfs, and Goblins are treated equal, because they are equal". Ouch, I'm harsh. Well its the truth. Purebloods thought up this idea and forced this idea onto Harry. I feel in a way that they superseded the prophecy. This is not the power that the Dark Lord knows not... is it? More soon please. I need to see Harry kick some ass and take some names.
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  • From ANON - carol on November 28, 2005
    OMG! Thank You! I appreciate you working on this chapter in the morning, it was superb! Alot of info in this one, it keeps getting better and better. I seriously can not wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - lynntownsend on November 26, 2005
    Is it just me, or am I not alone in hoping something REALLY horrible happens to Snape? (Preferably involving "flesh-eating
    parasites" concentrated in his groinal area?

    I love yer story BTW...
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2005
    Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Katelynxm on November 25, 2005
    Hey, this chapter deserved two reviews form me, so here goes:


    Hmm, maybe Snape started out with good intentions, but the ability to have a sex slave tempted him to go over to the dark side. (Just like Dumbledore feared giving him the DADA job would.) Yeah, death of a soul...the death of Snape's soul to Darkness? Maybe just the death of Harry's old soul, cuz' now he's a new person, but he can still be happy with draco???

    Can't wait to see Harry's training, wil he train with Snape, or just have extra lessons with his other teachers. (I'm kinda missing Hagrid here, can only imagine his response to all this..anger...greif..confusion...bashfulness...shouldn'tve said tha'.^^)

    I'm kinda hoping that in the end, Harry gets to Have Ginny and Draco, b/c he deserves both of them, and after all his pain, he shouldn't be forced to choose!!!

    Wait, what if Harry runs away to see Ginny(see, and talk, not have relations with - so he doesn't go against the marriage.)
    He could leave behind money and food and "sexual stimulation" for Severus so that he could still provide for Severus, and then leave a note saying where he went (very vagualy that is) and proof that he is safe and will return home.(doesn't say when!) That way he wouldn't be being a bad husband!!!


    That would be awesome...either way, this story is still awesome..I really hope something sparks some definance in Harry soon..last time it was Draco..Maybe Snape says something about Draco(Or Ginny) that infuiates Harry so much that he fights back...

    Can't wait fo the next chapter(as always)!
    -XM
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  • From ANON - desperate contention on November 24, 2005
    NEXT CHAPTER! NOW!
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  • From ANON - Kristine on November 24, 2005
    just don't have Harry totally give in. i'm sure he can make sure Snivilus enjoys himself and pretend to enjoy what's being done to him without totally giving in and being the dutiful husband. so many stories like this i've read where Harry totally caves and loves his forced mate. just once i'd like to see one where Harry gets a bit of his own back and makes the other guy just as miserable as he is.
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  • From ANON - deb on November 24, 2005
    well thats a weird story i have to admit i mean why is harry still fighting agaist it so much? lol of course he is! why is Snape doing it? anyway ! bad boy! i hope Snape sucsseds likes lol i dont know why but i do
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  • From ANON - anonymous on November 23, 2005
    this ending should be illegal! how could you end it like that. and maybe i'm slow, but what is still up with malfoy? Does he like harry himself, please let them end up together. Right now i'm pulling out my hair, i need more, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great chapter, and yes more informative, but at the same time, still puzzling.
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  • From MidnightLilly on November 23, 2005
    oh please save that boy, I love Severus to death=) but what he's doing in this fic is wrong and Dumbledore should be killed for what he's done.
    I wouldn't forgive any of them for forcing Harry into this.
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  • From ANON - sak on November 23, 2005
    Yes, definitely more information in here (as well as more intimidation by Snape). Being the blockhead I am, it does not make any sense to me, but I can tell the pieces are there. If I can stomach it (because this tortured Harry is difficult to read), I may reread the earlier bits to see what I might see.
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  • From ANON - FluffNutter on November 23, 2005
    Ooo...another chapter and so soon. Yay! This story keeps twisting and turning and I'm hooked on the rollercoaster high. Keep on!
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  • From ANON - JJ on November 23, 2005
    I'm hooked.
    Is Snape evil?
    Is he doing this to destroy Harry?
    And Draco mentioning that something is fishy REALLY has me going.
    You evil person you.
    Please write more!!!
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  • From ANON - Butterbutt on November 23, 2005
    I don't know WHAT's happening but I'm mad as hell and Harry's not gonna take it anymore!! Hee hee!
    Yay! Another chapter!!
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