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By : Roedhunt

From ANON - lemonade on October 11, 2005
Whoa! How did I miss chapter 16? Did you give us TWO?? (((hugs)))

THANK YOU!!
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From ANON - acr on October 10, 2005
Well, I'm glad Harry finally told Albus off. Good chapter.
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From ANON - lemonade on October 10, 2005
Wow. Have no idea what that was all about. Albus and Severus indicated it was the bond failing. If the two of them were supposed to be 'willing', why did no one listen to Harry? I don't think that he could have been more clear on the fact that he was anything BUT willing to be involved. I believe he even prepared for death as his option of preference, doesn't get any clearer than that. And ALBUS?? What is he thinking? What Harry said to him was very true. Every single time Severus was with Harry, he was forced. Harry wanted none of it, and I can't think of a time that he didn't beg it to not happen. Does that mean that Severus could be prosecuted? That's what the contract said. Harry was forced into the bond, wasn't willing from the get go, so does that mean that everyone involved could be prosecuted? Or does a 'life-debt' absolve the guilt of rape? I can't imagine a place where that would be true, but... hey.. it's your world.

Actually, there could be a few reasons.
1. Voldemort is meddling in Harry's physiology, making him not respond and therefore break the bond and lose two adversaries
2. Malfoy is meddling, either on his own or on Voldy's behalf
3. Harry's vow is causing the pain by interfering with the bond
4. Harry's soul is dying and trying to take it's bonded soul with it (If I'm going down, I'm taking you with me!! Mwahahaha!! ;D )
5. Ginny's relationship with Harry was more than we thought it was, maybe she had a bond with him that interferes with Snapes
6. This is a dream/vision of Harry's and much of it isn't real-- maybe Voldy's doing, to try to make him die? give up? kill his soul? I dunno.

The only reason I even put 6 in there is that some of the reactions are so random, especially to Harry's point of view, and the whole pushy "tell me what you are dreaming and I will fix it" sinister thing. That screams that something is really wrong. Oh, and why is the staff trying to get him to call them by name? Especially after they forced him to marry Snape? They have to know how pissed off he must be. It's kinda creepy. Very Stepford Wives. ~shiver~

I hope you update soon... I'm dying to know what's going on!
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From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2005
Meanie! You have enough angst to tie the Gordian Knot (look it up!) and then a major cliffhanger! Wow. I need to go get my heart checked. I don't think it can take this kinda stress. :b
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From CassandraMalfoy on October 10, 2005
Uh oh!!!!!
Poor Harry!!!!!!
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From ANON - Eliza on October 07, 2005
Just wanted to say that I think this story ROCKS! The dynamic between Harry and Snape is interesting, and you can feel bad for both characters. Anways, I hope you can continue on :)

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From ANON - sweettee on October 06, 2005
I just finnished reading chapter's 14- 15 and I can't wait for the next up date which I hope is real soon
I'am emailing all my friends to tell them about this fic again and that it is update to chapter 15.
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From ANON - desperate contention on October 02, 2005
now I'M the one screaming!!
AAAHHH
u evil person!!
so many questions... whats going on?
what does malfoy know, or what has he done????
i cant wait for the next chapter, and it had better be up soon, or im going to hunt u down and... make u write it!

but i love it, one of the best fan fics ive ever read
oh the suspense!!
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From ANON - JJ on October 02, 2005
I'm really glad you're updating so frequently. This is not a complaint, but I'm lost. Or maybe I have just too many questions. Rather than ask and appear stupid, I'll just have to wait for your next thrilling update. Yea!
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From ANON - anonymous on September 30, 2005
i absolutely love this story. It is one of my ultime favourites. Poor Harry, i hope soon that things start looking better for him, but i love the way that he's still not giving in to snape to quickly. Please update soon
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From ANON - sak on September 30, 2005
You are evil because I do have more questions. Draco Malfoy is definitely not some inocuous bystander in this is he? As if the pot needs more stirring!
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From ANON - Lasski on September 30, 2005
I'm beginning to tear my hair out... what is Draco playing at?? So very pleased that you updated so fast but my head is spinning more than ever. You'll have to update fast this time before my head explodes. Excellent!
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From ANON - lemonade on September 30, 2005
Wooo HOOOO!! I've been waiting for Harry to give him at least a teeny taste of hell for everything he'd done. I get the suspicion that the vows they made during the wedding are magically binding. I bet Harry won't ever respond, no matter WHAT Severus brews, and Snape will be mightily disturbed to find out that Harry won't be getting any friendlier toward him until the marriage ends (and he can be manipulated with potions or imperius) or one of them dies. It would serve Severus right to not know about the vows after all he kept from Harry. I love Draco in this, even though Harry really hates him, he's the only one who seems to have things figured out and is at least approaching Harry hinting at the truth. Hermione doesn't seem to know, otherwise I'd say she's the one he could count on. Now maybe Harry would think about teaming up with Malfoy in order to do something about his situation. I'll bet that slippery slytherins can manipulate the situation better than honest griffindors, so my money is on Draco, slime that he is. I'm so glad you updated, that last chapter was hard on the heart, I needed to see Harry stick up for himself at least. Keeping me on edge, playing with emotions, that's what is making me check for this when I get on here. Well done.

Oh, and did Harry insinuate that Draco and Severus were an item before the marriage?? Now that IS interesting. Will Ginny be able to help Harry? Maybe the memory of his night with Ginny would serve to piss Severus off. I'd LOVE for that to get rubbed in his face. Well, I'll quit begging for retribution out loud, here. It's your story... and good the way it is...don't think I'm not appreciating it when I voice my vengeance wishes. ;D
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From ANON - acr on September 30, 2005
Good chapter. What's up with Malfoy? Does he have a crush on Harry? Or Severus? I can't wait for more.
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From ANON - KatelynXM on September 30, 2005
Hmmm *looks over at her Snape plushie, who is alienated from the rest in a corner, and wonders whether or not she can trust him*.

Will Hermione and Ron EVER pull their heads out of their asses? What do they think could have happened to Harry, I mean , 1-he said 'dont touch me!', 2 -it was their eh-hem wedding night! And now Draco has got me seriousy worried. Please dont let Draco rape Harry please, as if Snape hadn't been traumatizing enough. And as much as the whole incident about the lotion thing counts as a point twoards Severus to me, Im still pissed that during his last rape session with Harry he said 'my needs". What about Harry? Does anyone even care? I do *hugs Harry plushie*. If I was Harry, and I wanted retribution I would be trying my best to make sev's life a living hell. Also, i wonder if that dream Harry had will be explained soon too.

p.s- Ive made up my mind (not that it really matters, cuz you da awesome author, not me), I kinda dont want this to be slash with Harry and Snape. Even if it wasn't m/m, i could never see anyone falling in love with someone if what happened in this story happened to them. Also, instead of mpreg, I think they would more likely adopt. I'm sure their are a lot of orphans out there(voldies doing of course) and Snape would probably adopt hoping to appeal to Harry because Harry is an orphan. Plus, since the chances of Harry buggering Snape are slim to none, and that forcing Harry to become pregnant would be horrible of snape, Im kinda seeing that as the only option. As far as 'accidentaly' getting Harry pregnant, I think a lot of magic on Severus's part would have to be done to make a man pregnant- so regular sex wouldn't lead to any pregnancies. Unless Harry turns out to be some kind of half-breed. (But in the end, whatever you decide will be the best, I surely have no doubts.)

p.s.s-I love this stroy, and I loved this chapter! I am totally addicted, and you update so fast. You are truly an amazing writer, and I would love to read any other stories you might post - speaking of which, when your done with this story, i would love if you could check out my challenge 'escape', especially since i love your Harry character soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much! ^_~

(always waiting for the next update)-XM
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