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Reviews for The Death of a Soul

By : Roedhunt
  • From ANON - JJ on September 26, 2005
    They're both hurting!!!
    Will it ever get better?
    Will Snape ever tell Harry about whatever happened to him?
    Will you update again soon?
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  • From Kiramara on September 25, 2005
    update this soon! This is a good story. I really must say that it is definitly an original.
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  • From ANON - KatelynXM(aka anon) on September 25, 2005
    okay part 2 of review, sorry my computer went all weird on me.

    I really love Harry in this chapter, he's broken, but not lost. He still challenges Severus, and makes some very good points, my favorite line being the one in the aforementioned review above. I hope harry doesn't go suicidal, he can't die just b/c of everyone else's ignorance and evil! All this time he has faught for everything he beleives in, for everyone he loves, he now really needs to learn how to fight and try to live for himself.

    p.s- I wonder what happened to Ginny. Why did they have to take her away from hogwarts just for having sex with harry? Was it b/c she put up a fight? If she did, will she ever see harry again? Whether or not harry falls for severus their reunion must be seen, due to the fact that so much was left unanswered between them.

    p.s.s-IIIIII LLLLLLLLLLOOOOOVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEE TTTHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSTTTTTTOOOORRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYY SSSOOOOOOOOO MMMMMUUUUUCCCCCHHHHHHHHH! and dang, you update pretty fast.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2005

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  • From ANON - lemonade on September 25, 2005
    I think that Dumbledore was an insensitive jerk, expecting Harry to feel like going out in public after what amounted to rape. Can you get Harry to hex him for me?? At least Severus actually seems to care nominally. Well, at least enough to give him space to try to cope. How sad for Harry. Hope he finds SOMEONE he can talk to in order to help him cope, maybe the Weasleys.
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  • From ANON - Carol on September 21, 2005
    I like the storyline and I hope that Harry comes around. it is nice to see a different side of Snape. Please update soon!

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  • From ANON - JJ on September 18, 2005
    WOW! That was intense.

    More, please!!!!
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  • From ANON - desperate contention on September 16, 2005
    I feel so sorry for Snape. He loved Harry, and now that has all gone to ruin.
    I cried at the end (again)! you're story makes me more emotional than the Harry Potter series!!!
    i feel so sorry for Harry, having to be raped, (well in a way).
    i have no idea where your story is going, so the next chapter will sur[rise me no matter what happens
    but please keep going, because i love it!

    :)
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  • From ANON - Roedhunt on September 14, 2005
    I want to thank everyone for your wonderful reviews!!! I'm just sorry I can't respond to each of them..*pouts* (I can at my live journal tho) Some of your questions I can't answer because it will give the plot away. Sorry. I will say that things are not always what they seem and you have to read between the lines or better yet, read what's *not* there. *grins*

    Annie
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  • From ANON - KatelynXM on September 13, 2005
    omg! that was so sad!
    Poor poor harry, i really hope he will have his revenge, or that ron and hermioine will save him, or something! He's just a teenager, and everyones forcing him to do all these horrible things! The injustice of it all! And Snape, that bastard better realise what an ass/petifile he is and kill himself! And dumbledore and fudge should die too!AHHHHHHHHHH!

    damn, this is an awesome story, you have gotten me so riled up. The paret in the last chapter were harry remembered ginny brought tears to my eyes, and im really glad the sex remained non-con, because it would have ruined the sad feeling you get from reading this story. Who will save our beloved hero? I have this story on my reccomended reading list, and will be checking regularly for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - lemonade on September 13, 2005
    Feel the rage, baby!! ;D I just found this, and it has quite the emotional impact going for it. I have the most sympathy for Harry, and I think his vows were brilliant!!! (Hey, I empathize with very stubborn people, what can I say.) Snape's expectations were quite.... unrealistic. Ron and Hermione.... well, I like that they've had to pay. Testifying against him was the ultimate betrayal. They should have noticed that no one was on Harry's side and supported him. Albus in canon manipulates (not to the fanon extent, but still... fanon gets it from SOMEWHERE) and he is in rare form in this fic. Snape treating Harry like a mushroom (keep 'em in the dark and feed them bullshit) seems right on target for his character and is giving you lots of directions that you can go in this, so it's difficult to really guess what's next.

    Well done angst. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - CanadiangirllovesHP on September 13, 2005
    This is an awesome story. I look forward to the next up-dtae.
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  • From ANON - Phorcys on September 12, 2005
    I love it, A story where when Harry discovers he has an arranged patner he doesn't swoon with desire adn immediatley fall in love. This for the relative temr of realistic is more realitic. I love Harry's reaction. It was so nasty, and emotive it felt real, and not fake like a lot of stories please keep writting.
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  • From ANON - acr on September 11, 2005
    Good chapter. Very intense. Poor Harry.
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  • From ANON - thistlerose on September 07, 2005
    I keep wondering if this is going to be what finally breaks Harry completely. After all, having absolutely no control over any part of what is supposed to be a personal decision (who to marry and/or have sex with) and, in essence, being forced to accept your own rape, has got to be one of, if not THE, worst thing in the world. Stengthen Harry - somehow I don't think so.

    Keep up the good work! This is masterfully written and I look forward to all future chapters.
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