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Reviews for The Death of a Soul

By : Roedhunt
  • From ANON - acr on September 06, 2005
    Wow. That was intense. Poor Harry. I wonder what happens when he finally snaps?
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  • From ANON - desperate contention on September 03, 2005
    wow!
    harry wasn't the only one awash with emotions
    i laughed at the seamus and harry thing, and i cried when harry did, and i felt practically every single emotion (exept maybe some such as jealousy... but u get what i mean)
    this story has truly touched me... in all ways ;-)
    i think it is such so eloquently written, unlike a lot of other fan fiction out there wihch reads like it has been written by a 12 yr old, and no doubt some of it has
    although that is a bit hypocritical from a reviewer who writes poorly, (and whos pen name doesnt even make sense...)
    but yes, please keep going
    and ignore your real life, you dont need it if you can write like this!!
    i really like your snape, the way he still has some of his old snarkiness about him, but the compassion he feels for harry is truly heart-melting

    love it!
    love YOU!
    love from desperate contention :)
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  • From ANON - KatelynXM on September 02, 2005
    awesome, simply awesome. harry's reaction fits him to a t, and i actually cried on chapter eleven. The situation was just so hopeless, and even though it wasn't rape, it was still just so sad. I like that Severus isn't mean to Harry, but at the same time i wonder if this fic will turn into slash or not. I hope not, i felt so sorry for harry when he thought about Ginny, and I am dearly hoping they will find a way to eachothers arms again. But if Severus and Hary do fall in love, im sure ill be okay with it. this fic is just so well written, it would probably have me chanting SS/Hp 4evah!

    anyway, i have already said this but i really like your harry. He was mean,he was desperate, he was trapped and heartbroken.I also liked the first part of their wedding night. There were no cliches, harry was still afraid and sad, he didn't isntantly become hard or suddenly be aroused, this makes your story so believable. Lease let harry still be uncomfortable through the rest of the night, because combined with Severus caring it truly makes this fic unique.
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  • From ANON - Laurablade on August 15, 2005
    This is such an awesome story. I love forced marriage/bonding stories especially when they involve SS/HP. you've actually made harry a fighter and he doesn't just bend over and beg like most stories. He's always to easily persuaded and forgiving. Here he's protesting and an utter bastard. THANK YOU!!! You've made my day and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - vanessa on August 15, 2005
    I absolutely loved the idea at the end!! My goodness this fic is soo interesting, you never seis to amaze me!!
    Please don't make us wait to long for the next chapter. :D
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  • From ANON - desperate contention on August 15, 2005
    why did you have to stop there?
    WHYYYY??!!

    that was an interesting and unexpected... event... with the toilet... *ahem* yes
    i don't know how on earth you came up with it!
    i like the idea that they can't hurt each other, but i guess that makes sense cos otherwise harry would kill potter... (snape)... in an instant

    yeah, good story, please continue!
    but faster, cos ive been dying for this chapter!
    i dont care if it means the chapters are crap, or shorter, just PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

    :D
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  • From ANON - NightOwl on August 15, 2005
    Oh my god... This last part of last chapter was a little bit too much for me. I can very well understand why is Harry so angry. His wov is written brilliantly! (Your writting is really EXCELLENT!! - atmosphere, feelings, talking!) But the scene on the toilett - I cannot imagine, why should their gown be so weird. Yes, may be they are not able to open the gown without his partner's help - but why they can't piss without help?
    I think Dumbledore found really "promising" way how to make a new Dark Lord from Harry, right after Voldemort's death.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on August 15, 2005
    Not being able to take a piss by yourself seems unnecessarily harsh. When it feels like the whole world is against you, a few minutes staring at yourself in the mirror in the bathroom is every person's right. Alone.
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  • From ANON - acr on August 15, 2005
    good chapter. Very intense. I'm confused about the gown thing...
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  • From ANON - Lyoness on August 15, 2005
    Did I mention I want Snape and Dumbledore DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - nlb on August 14, 2005
    marvelous! you are truly a master of words...i like that you let harry stay mad at his friends, because, honestly, such disloyalty could never be forgotten or forgiven. i absolutely loved it, when harry broke his wand and his wedding vow was...classic. please update soon!
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  • From ANON - desperate contention on August 09, 2005
    wow really good, pls update soon!
    i have to admit, that id seen this story floating round for the past few months, but i had only read the start of the first chappie (didnt really give it a go) and tho it was well written, it just didnt appeal to me
    This time i kept reading, and im SO glad i did
    its really good, and i cant wait for harry to confront snape in private now theyre married, and i wanna see how snape reacts

    one thing im confused about tho is harry breaking his wand.
    what exactly happened there? what was the orange/red glow?
    does that mean harry doesnt have a wand to do magic with and thus snape has even more control over him?
    or have i confused myself, and it was someone elses wand...
    so please elaborate on this

    but thats a seriously kick ass story
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  • From ANON - Lyoness on August 05, 2005
    I hope Snape dies because of the things he has done to Harry. I hope that he suffers and that Harry finds the strenght to break him. Did I mention I HATE Snape??
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on August 04, 2005
    I love dark, angry Harry. Pretty harsh with Sev in the vows. Then again, he does hate being lied to. Too bad there wasn't a bouquet. I would've liked to see who caught it.
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  • From ANON - Lovespell on August 04, 2005
    The whole situation is just nuts. It's seems uncannily unfair to Harry that he can do nothing about it. And can anyone blame his anger? Please update soon.
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