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Reviews for The Death of a Soul

By : Roedhunt
  • From ANON - Ang on September 05, 2007
    Are you ever going to finish this? I'm dying to know what happens in the end
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  • From zafaran on August 22, 2007
    Ummm. Any chances of getting more chapters on this story any time soon? This is a totally fascinating look into someone with mental illness and what he does to the object of his obsession. It's unfortunately a bit too much like real life for me since I've got a sister who's a convicted serial stalker, and reading this makes me just as uncomfortable as I'm fascinated. If you are one of the authors on aff.net who use email update lists to notify your readers of updates to your stories, please add me to the mailing list for this story. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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  • From ANON - snarrylover on February 21, 2007
    ch 24:

    they're all jerkfaces. all of them. none deserve to be in harry's company.

    excellent job, cheers
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  • From ANON - snarrylover on February 21, 2007
    ch 23:

    i've only read a few paragraphs of ch 23 and i already want to kill severus. hes using alcohol as an excuse!?!?! and telling harry that harry was the one that approached him the night before and god knows what else... *pulls out lots of torture devices...* . i hope he meets his death painfully.

    but so far, im really enjoying this. you really manage to bring out the characters emotions, especially harry's. cheers
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  • From ANON - snarrylover on February 21, 2007
    ch 22:

    oh. my. god. oh Harry *tear*. snape is so evil...i've never read a fic where he's like this. i'd rather be stuck with draco than snape at this point. please get harry away from him. please *runs off to read more*
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  • From ANON - snarrylover on February 21, 2007
    ch 21:

    OMFG! what the hell is snape up to and why is he doing whatever he's doing!?!? he's trying to guilt trip harry. draco even seems better than sev. poor harry. off i go to read more, cheers
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  • From zafaran on February 20, 2007
    Ah, phooey. I ran out of chapters to read. D*mn this story is good. Bit twisted, but I like that sometimes. I'm very interested to see where you are going with this story from this point.

    I do find some of Harry's conclusions under counselling to be bothersome. Encouraged to conclude that because he didn't reach out to the others he was wrong and should *correct* this and reconnect to his "friends". Considering the depth of betrayal by everyone around him why should he have to blame himself because he didn't go to people who had betrayed him so profoundly, so many times. Yes, Severus is sick and twisted, but the others aided and abetted him at every step of his destruction of Harry. Hermione's "solution" to the vow particularly nauseated me. She was so pleased that she found a way to negate the vow that Harry really meant, and made Harry take a vow that put him even more into Severus's power.

    I am looking forward to seeing what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran{at}fastmail{dot}fm
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  • From ANON - Ari on January 31, 2007
    That was very interesting. Oh so Snape does claim to love his husband, huh? I really think that is a twisted king of love. Keep at it. I cannot decide if I love it or if I am creeped out by this fic.
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  • From hermionesnape85 on January 31, 2007
    Wonderful...
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  • From Shadow1290 on January 30, 2007
    Ok i HATE Sanpe please dont tell me that ur going to make them be together again!! poor Harry i hope they find a way out of it and Harry can have some peace!!! MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Dragonero on January 30, 2007
    I really love this story!!! On the one hand I want to know how it will end, on the other hand I would like it to go on forever!!! Anyway, I hope the story will not end to soon and I
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  • From AkumaKawa on January 30, 2007
    Good lord. What happened to Snape that caused him to think he was saving Harry showing Harry love by doing what he did?

    When will he get the psychological help that he so desperately needs?
    Will Snape try to commit suicide, he seems like a likely candiate once he realises what he has done and that it has hurt Harry. Not to mention the depression he is in.

    Keep up the good work, coolsa.
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  • From Bookworm51485 on January 30, 2007
    It's getting to the end and I'm still confused. That's why I don't read mysteries because I hate not understanding what's going on or not knowing what's going to happen. But I just love your story too much to not keep reading. I truly can't wait for your next update, hopefully things will be cleared up. I'm still not completely clear on Snape's motives, other than maybe a sick obsession. And also the issue of the bond with Harry now. At least now, we have a clear idea of what happened with Voldemort, though going over this last chapter it seems like there was more to that too.

    I can't imagine putting so much thought into a story where a lot of the facts and events seemed so twisted yet in the end you can see them all coming together, even to the last few words. Wow

    And lastly before I end, I don't know if you want anon reviews or not but if you do there is now an option that allows you to enable anon reviews. It seems like many authors still haven't gotten the word that they can do this now, so I'm trying to spread the word to anyone who seems to have not gotten the notice.
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  • From spritestar on January 28, 2007
    i read. a lot. I've read many stories of diffrent settings and plots. hundreds of senarios have passed before my eyes and plots twist and turn every day. I've read everything from and including veela harry to its an adapt harry day. But never once, in all the time i've been persuing fanfiction, have i ever encountered a story like this. not ever. not once. i stumbled upon this story last night, at around nine pm my time, and got to chapter 20 by 1am before i was forced to go to sleep. i did not want to. i wanted to finish and UNDERSTAND what you had done. what had been writen and what was going on. I needed to. You have writen such a dynamic plot and storie line that it was nearly imposable for me to turn away from it. It was fresh, strong and strangly endering. at the same time you made snap a bad guy, you made him a good guy. you deveated from the normal that it was no hardship to read, and now that i find my self at the end of what you have curintly writen, chapter 33 part 1, i find myself looking forward to another chapter, the completion of the idea you have planted and the situation you have enganered. To many writing is just a pass time, a sport or a recreation. But to some it is a passion and a calling. your story seems to place you in the latter, and i find the writen world richer for it. i hope you continue to write, fanfiction or regular fiction, long after this storie is completed.

    thank you
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  • From PrismaKakkerra on January 19, 2007
    Hiya. I really liked your story, it was rather disturbing, and sad on both parts. I liked it so much, I went ahead and made a short music vid to it! I hope ya like it! Here ya go- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OD25Hm7qHE4



    Prismakakkerra ^.^
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