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Reviews for Jealousy

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - Emma on August 24, 2005
    Wow! This story is really good! Where do you come up with the inspiration? Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Michelle on August 24, 2005
    Hey! Wonderful story! You write H and D so well... The chemistry is amazing, and addictive! I also love how you are writing Harry and Ron. Can't wait to read your next chapter!!! Keep up the great work :)
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  • From ANON - 1red1 on August 23, 2005
    awwww... atill no update. :(
    I find myself checking this almost every second day, to see if the new chapter is up yet.... sad, i know.

    Please update soon and put me out of my misery! :)
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  • From ANON - tt on August 21, 2005
    wow that was soooooooo good please please please update soon. i really like the thing where she said she'd tell harry if he did it again and that p helped her get up. draco was great in the fight too.
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  • From ANON - VW on August 21, 2005
    This story is AMAZING. =D You really are an incredible writer. I also like your one shot fic, Observations of a Pureblood Debutant.

    Your chapters are not too long, but not too short, and you pay the perfect amount of attention to the details. There's not TOO much (which can end up verbose and tiring), but there's not too LITTLE either (which makes a scene unrealistic). Your story is wonderful! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - pixi on August 21, 2005
    mmm pretty story... BOY FIGHT!
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  • From on August 20, 2005
    OH MY GAWD YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anna Boyd on August 19, 2005
    I love both this story and obscurity...you are so amazingly talented! i really like this one though because its very original. i can NOT wait to see what happens and i check both your stories everyday to see if theyre updated...
    GREAT story...its my favorite of all the ones ive read on this site, update soon please please please please!!!

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  • From ANON - winn on August 19, 2005
    I simply loved your fic! The story is light, but well developed, I can't wait for next chapter! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Annie on August 18, 2005
    Hey Rain,

    I love it!!! So many times I've wanted to get revenge on a boyfriend who treated me in this way but I've never had the courage to do it! Ahhh... if only I had my own personal Draco to help me out! That would be... erm... handy! Hee hee!

    Anyway, this story is brilliant! I've read stories before where jealousy is the main theme but those other stories do not compare to yours! Your writing is brilliant and very effective. The gradual stages of Draco's plan is moving along just at the right pace and I love the he's so confident and Hermione is so squirmy (I think that's the right word to explain it!).

    Ron is such a meany!!! I definitely know how it feels to have a boyfriend finish with you and then turn up to a big social event with another girl with him being all over her and everyone talking about it... (I'm not bitter... honest!) and it's definitely not nice! I got my revenge by turning all his friends against him for a while and from me not speaking to him but it wasn't as effective as this method would have been!

    I can't wait to see what happens nect so update soon!!

    AnnieXxX
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  • From ANON - v. impressed on August 18, 2005
    you are an incredibly talented writer... ur story flows so smoothly and u have me captivated. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - sharkbait on August 17, 2005
    You're doing an awesome job!!! Thanks for updating . . . two whole chapters . . . so quickly . I'm so glad Hermione finally lightened up a little. LOVED the makeout session! Keep up the good work . . . and the updates :). I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Sunny June on August 17, 2005
    "She couldn
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  • From ANON - Sunny June on August 17, 2005
    Oh Rain! All the hub-bub about your story is in fact spot on! It's fantastic! I've only gotten through two chapters, but I simply love it. . . I think it was BRILLIANT how you had Granger and Malfoy lay down the terms right off the bat - no nonsense and Hermiome made sure to lay it down the way she wants it. . . Oh man I can just SEE how great this story is going to be. The only thing I'm concerned about is why would Ron dump her and then try and make her jealous? It's one of those weird things that happens when people break up. I know one of my exes who dumped me went off about two months later how I was a huge witch and he hated me . . . apparently it was easier for him to be mad at me than to be my friend because he knew he was a punk . . . GOSH boys are dumb. In fact, that ex rather reminds me of Ron . . . he was a red head. . . WOW, look at me make this review all about me . . . WHOOPS!

    AMAZING story so far girl . . . love it!

    SJ
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  • From ANON - Lessa on August 17, 2005
    Oh happy day! It was wonderful to see that this had been updated when I checked in today. It was hot and funny, I can just hear the panic in her voice as Draco lays her out, setting up the scene. The fact that they both got lost in it is what makes it so good. I bet Padma reads Ron the riot act about his actios while he's still petrified. *snicker* Hermione threatened to tell Harry, that is inspired. And what is Draco thinking about through all of this???? Hopefully we find out in the next chapter as well as some more snogging.
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