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Reviews for Jealousy

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - Alana on August 17, 2005
    OMG, I absolutely loved this chapter, cos it was so fucking good! And honesty I think that this fic is one of the best d/hr fics I've ever read! I totally loved the scene when Draco and Hermione were making out, cos the scene was so hot and also very sweet. You're very good at describing scenes and of course the characters. Good job! And the scene that really got me cracking was when Ron found them, it was hilarious. That was simply priceless!
    You've got to update real soon, cos I really want to now what's gonna happen?
    Alana
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  • From ANON - Kitiara Starfire on August 17, 2005
    OMG what a fabulous story. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Jade on August 17, 2005
    Oh, you updated! Even faster than I had expected! :) Great chapter, by the way! Update soon!
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  • From NarakusKoi on August 17, 2005
    Oh my, that was really hot and heavy! I'm glad to finally see some touching between those two. Whew! :3 I really really hope you update soon. I'm eager to find out what happens next :D
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  • From ANON - .:sMs:. on August 17, 2005
    Wowowowowowow.................................... I'm so totally into this story; I followed this link from Dangerous Liaisons, and now am totally going to look up your other stories.............

    Another thing; do you have your own website? To put up your work? I'm asking this (usually I ask AFF authors this) because AFF has thess technical errors in uploading where sometimes ends of chapters are cut off or some words are mangled or sentences are strung together, or even when parts of the middle are missing...you catch my drift. There've been so many stories I've read like that. I'm asking because, if you had a site, I could just go there and read your work instead of the possible risk in AFF.

    In any case, things are just heating up and getting started here on "Jealousy"... I *SO* can't wait for the next installment. Happy writing! ^^
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  • From ANON - 1red1 on August 16, 2005
    ooooh that was perfect!!!! You create such lovely chemistry between them, and the way you do it it doesn't seem old or already done.
    I loved that scene and I'm really enjoying this story!

    and an update so soon!!!! :D
    I checked here today, barely hoping that there would be a new chpater so soon after I last reviewed, but here it is! yay!
    I feel like I got a suprise birthday present or something... LOL

    I have this mortal fear that whenever I find a story that I really like, that the author is going to desert it!
    So please please contunue this, I can't wait for the next update. :)
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  • From ANON - shell on August 16, 2005
    I really enjoy this new story. The reactions of the characters are believable and funny. I hope to read a lot more of it, and hope that it continues to be as fun. - Shell
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 16, 2005
    LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT.

    Did I mention that I like your story? :)
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  • From ANON - HiddenAllusion on August 16, 2005
    Wow! This seems to just get better and better with each chapter. I absolutely love it... I'm not very good at saying why or how, but I do. Thanks for adding me to your update list, too; it made my day to see an update so soon! Thanks for another great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Soranji on August 16, 2005
    OMG super fast update. Great chapter. I liked the fight scene, I bet Malfoy didn't expect Ron to hid him. I love the action between Draco and Hermione. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - elisha on August 16, 2005
    OMG!!! i couldn't even belive that you upfated so quickly!! you are soooo my HERO!!!!! i looove this story!!! OMG, i loved the set up, him all buisness-like, her all nervous and changing her mind, then all forgotten.....sooooo good! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Zoltaire the Inscrutable on August 16, 2005
    Okay, I was going to wait until I had completed all chapters before reviewing. BUT.... the 'Dragons don't make good pets' line was too too good to pass up. That was great, and thanks to you, I will be thinking that from now on when I read a Dramione pairing. that was great. As for the rest of the story so far, I am really enjoying it. The whole make Ron jealous thing, but Draco's take on seperating himself and his name as far from his father as possible is pretty unique. Great job on great writing and a great plot.

    Zoltaire the Insructable
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  • From ANON - Liz on August 16, 2005
    This was an excellent chapter, I must say! Your interactions between Draco and Hermione are sweat-inducing, and that is a compliment. Not many fan fic authors can make characters that believable, so pat yourself on the back for knowing them so well. Update again soon!!! That goes for Obscurity as well!!!!! (Not asking too much, am I?)
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  • From ANON - cat on August 16, 2005
    This is the best yet- I love both your stories and this chapter of Jealousy was amazing. The hottest Draco ever- I can't wait for he and Hermione to "soothe each other's wounds" later. It's a thing of beauty.
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  • From ANON - kit on August 16, 2005
    this is one of my favorite fanfics with draco/herm... I love how it all started out to get revenge, and how both the characters remain true to themselves. Are you going to take this into their 7th year? I really hope you do, cuz it's an amazing story!
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