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Reviews for Jealousy

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - LucKyo (not logged in) on August 16, 2005
    Oh, I love this! I'm positively gushing over it. Hermione and Draco do make a really hot team and pissing Ron off has it benefits too. Great story. I have to add this to my favorites.
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  • From ANON - MICHELLE on August 16, 2005
    HAAAAAAA SOMEONE'S JEALOUS. THE GIT RON. I HATE HIM. I LOVE DRACO. GOOOOOOO DRACO. LOL
    UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - lorett on August 16, 2005
    RAIN...Rain...Rain...

    I LOVE IT!

    I WANT MORE!

    FINALLY some good, ol fashioned snogging! YIPPEE!

    MORE! MORE! MORE!

    Wonderfully done. You're VERY GOOD with the kissing scenes. I'm completely involved and lost in the moment.

    Bravo.

    Ready for more.

    Love you!

    L
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  • From ANON - moxie on August 16, 2005
    God, this story is amazing. very entertaining and I LOVE reading it. thank you SO much for updating!! yay! what a treat! i love the premise. Draco's a pro - yum. I wonder how he reacted to their kiss...?
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  • From ANON - Ava on August 16, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this story! I was so happy to see it updated. I meant to leave a review sooner, but I hadn't got around to it. Anyway, you write so well, and I love the whole plot of this story. Especially this chapter. Too bad Ron had to come along. ;) Although it that was the point of the snogging session. Great job! I've also been reading Obsurity (I hadn't got around to reviewing there either! I'm terrible, I know!), and I can't wait to read more of it as well. :)
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  • From ANON - asher on August 16, 2005
    want more! ... please... =)
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  • From ANON - ~Sakurashope7~ on August 16, 2005
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - KawaiiRyu on August 16, 2005
    Amazing. Lovely. I am in love with this story. Hermione's reaction to the makeout session--so real, so hot. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Petalsoft on August 16, 2005
    That was such a hot chapter! Love it love it love it

    Your ideas for this story are fantastic. Keep up the good work and I'm excited for more!
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  • From ANON - Bambu on August 16, 2005
    Chapter 6 was a terrific chapter... you've suddenly altered the entire dynamic with the snogging session. Suddenly it's real for both Hermione and Draco, and even if Ron hadn't meant to hurt Hermione I think his actions rather clarify his intentions for all to see: it was about Malfoy, not Hermione. I think the shove was a very effective device in demonstrating the fact that Ron doesn't think about Hermione as a lover, even if you mentioned it, you almost didn't need to. I'm most interested in seeing how Draco reacts to the fact that Ron shoved Hermione, and how Hermione will 'heal' Draco... not to mention their rather heated reaction to the other. (On an editorial note, this chapter was very clean from a beta perspective... well done, Rain.)
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  • From ANON - lunastar on August 16, 2005
    YAY!!!! You finally updated! This story is going so well.
    And finally, some action between Draco and Hermione.
    very well written. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - abby on August 16, 2005
    Hi there!!!

    I just wanted to say that I absolutely LOVE this story. I don't usually review fanfiction too much, but this one is just so good, I had to give you some encouragement to finish it (and quickly!!). I have read and reread the chapters you have written thus far. Please keep it coming.

    Teddy Bear Hugs
    (to you and your muse)

    Abby
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  • From ANON - Anna on August 16, 2005
    Awesome chapter!
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  • From ANON - Brittney on August 16, 2005
    I love this story!! I don't know how I missed it until now but I am soo glad that I have finally come across it. If you would email me when you update I would really appreciate it.
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  • From ANON - Know-it-all on August 15, 2005
    I absolutley loved this chapter! so so hot! I almost died. Honest. Keep up the good work.
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