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Reviews for Jealousy

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on August 15, 2005
    Ron is a hypocritical bastard! Lovin' it! I hope Hermione hexes him a few more times before this fic is over, that is, if it ever has to end. It doesn't right? I could read it for a lifetime.
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  • From ANON - Elmo on August 15, 2005
    i love how Hermione reacts to Draco's touch! its so cute! and, i love the fact that Patil was understanding and realized what an ass Ron is...

    so...how long do you think you need to update again? I'll give u 10 minutes....
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  • From ANON - Danielle on August 15, 2005
    This is really well written. It is so refreshing to find someone who will actually take the time to crreate a good plot line and not rush. I really like your characterizations. I am not usually a fan of stories that villanize Ron, but I really like this story. Thank you for taking the time to create a well written story that I can enjoy without noticing errors and illogical reasoning or bad characterizations.
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  • From ANON - Alana on August 15, 2005
    Another awesome chapter, I loved it how you described both of the characters, it is very well done. And loved in particular this scene :
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  • From ANON - Lady T on August 15, 2005
    I love this story, please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - 1red1 on August 14, 2005
    wow... just found this and I'm really enjoying it!
    I think you kept all the characters in character very well
    (although obviously you needed to bastardify Ron for the purposes of your story).

    I loved the flying scene, and the kiss... *swoon*

    Can't wait to see how this progresses.
    PLEEEEASE update soon!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Rooshka. on August 14, 2005
    Update soon please! A well written and original tale!
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  • From ANON - Kaye on August 14, 2005
    ACK!!! This is fabulous! What a wonderful story! Please keep up the great work. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - HiddenAllusion on August 13, 2005
    This is one of the best fics of this pairing I've read. It's enthralling and I love it! Very believable, and I like the way you're bringing them together. Thanks for this much, and I'll be holding my breath for more
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  • From ANON - elisha on August 13, 2005
    OMG!!!!!!!!! I'm am sooo totally in LOVE with this story!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!! is draco falling for hermione?? or does he just like to make her squirm? or is he not even sure himself??? OMG i cannot WAIT until the next chapter!!!!! *jumps up and down in anticipation* :)
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  • From ANON - Kit on August 13, 2005
    Very good chapter. I vote that he call her bella, its the sweet endearment that isn't too cute or too gushy, like sweetums or muffin, but isn't crude or stupid, like baby. I can't wait to read the next chapter. You have a very clever witty style to your writting, and I look forward to reading more.
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  • From Fallenrose on August 13, 2005
    I think that i will be nominating this story as i adore it. Hmm peaches, i think Draco could really embarress Hermione and get some tongues wagging with that one!

    Bring on the next chapter, more Draco the better!

    This story is getting better and better, keep it up!

    Fallenrose
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  • From on August 13, 2005
    OMG!
    I loved it !
    That last chapter was incredibly delicious.
    Hmmmm to receive a massage from Draco? *faints* Draco brushing his lips no my neck? *faints again*
    Looking forward to the next chapter o/

    *smooches*
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  • From ANON - tina on August 13, 2005
    OH MORE PLEASE!! SOON!! love this story!
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  • From ANON - Jade on August 13, 2005
    great chapter! hope to read more, so update soon!
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