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Reviews for Jealousy

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - cat on August 13, 2005
    I love it! Your Draco is the sexiest ever, and he and Hermione have such chemistry. I like that they can have that withOUT immediately fawning all over each other, instantaneously realizing that they are in love. It is a very refreshing and in-character portrayal.

    That said... I can't wait for the hook-up!
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  • From on August 13, 2005
    I love this! I can't wait to see Ron explode! For some reason, I can see Hermione and Draco snogging, and Ron walking in on them. That would be such a great scene! And I'm sure you'd be perfect to write it.
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  • From ANON - moxie on August 12, 2005
    More! More!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2005
    All I can say is "drool"
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  • From ANON - Lala on August 11, 2005
    Hi Rain,

    This is some great fiction. You have a wonderful writing style and the flow of the story is excellent and realistic. You deserve to be nominated. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the outstanding work!

    Lala
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  • From ANON - Maureen (CloudySkieZ) on August 11, 2005
    Again, you blow me away with your very discriptive scenes...I was tingling at the point where he said "peche"

    *moans*

    Ok nuff said, HOLLA BACK GIRL
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  • From ANON - Gracie on August 11, 2005
    I hate reading your stories. They are so amazing. The best fics on this site. But you take so long to update! It makes me want to wait until you are finished a fic before I even start reading it. The wait is painful. You're vicious!
    Like every other story you have written, this is top-notch. Of course I'll go vote because you deserve to win. But you are cruel....so very cruel....so very Slytherin!
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  • From ANON - lorett on August 11, 2005
    AHHHHHhhhhh! RAIN!

    HOW can you DO this to me?

    You start me off all excited and expectant and then it gets going along and I'm like, WHEE!!!!!!!!!!!

    AND THEN...just when I'm snuggling down into my VERY uncomfortable office chair to get all into the chappie....

    IT ENDS!!!!!!!!

    I was like, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

    OY, you're such a tease!

    This was fabulous, as always!

    LOVE IT!

    NEED IT!

    WANT MORE!

    QUICKLY!

    Lovin it more all the time.

    Lorett
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2005
    YAY. An Update. I was starting to think you had writers block but you're back Yay. I can't wait for more updates. Keep up the good work. I absolutly love a story where they aren't already married or together right away.
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  • From ANON - Tanya on August 11, 2005
    Wow...I really LOVE this story! It's amazing...I can't WAIT for the next update!
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  • From ANON - KawaiiRyu on August 11, 2005
    I love this story! Hermione *does* need to learn to touch him and be touched, and to be not skittish...*evil grin* Is more practice in order? You have their interactions very well played out. Side note--having you email out updates gave you a million brownie points! You are the first person here that has done that. Kudo points to you! *grin*
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  • From ANON - Neled on August 11, 2005
    Once again your writitng has left me wanting more! Keep up the fantastic work!
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  • From ANON - Liz on August 11, 2005
    So good, but such a tease! You really write Draco and Hermione well. I love the way they interact (in this story and your other one, Obscurity). You've got me really wondering how these storylines are going to play out, so PLEASE UPDATE SOON, on both stories!!!! I'm chopping at the bit for some good fan fiction.
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  • From ANON - saytheya on August 11, 2005
    lol I love hermione. she's so twitchy. she's going to need loads of practice before she's comfortable. either that or she'll have to get over it being draco touching her. update soon please!!
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  • From ANON - SanityEscapesMe on August 11, 2005
    Great story so far. I dont think I ever read this type of story before. Everyone always writes about them falling for each other once they get to seven year. Or Hermione ususually gets all pretty before the new school year and that's when Draco notices her. I really like this take of yours. Keep up the good work. I cant wait to read the next chapter. I really like how things are moving slowly also.
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