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Reviews for Jealousy

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From on June 27, 2005
    I hope you continue with this story, I reallt like it when Hermione tells either Ron or Harry off, and puts them in their place
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  • From ANON - Megan on June 25, 2005
    OMG this fic is awesome! I love the way you write, its so refreshing from the some of the other stories that are out there. The plot is great too. Please update soon :-)
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  • From ANON - RahNee on June 25, 2005
    Oh my goodness! I got to the end of chapter 4 and cried out, sobbing, "NO NO NO it can't be over! I must have more!" So let that be my only complaint...too damned short! And you can't just tantalize me with that little tidbit and then dangle a cliffie at me! What will happen in the old charms classroom??? OK, I realize that that could be considered two complaints...I stand corrected.

    I am a huge sucker for metaphors and I found this one particularly lovely: the one about her smile disappearing "like chalk in the rain." Loved it!

    Ha ha! I laughed aloud at this line: "He could even sneer in an undertone." Whee! What a great line.

    YOU MUST WRITE MORE! Seriously. I am not kidding. I am sitting here, waiting for you to update. My child will likely not be fed because I will be sitting staring at this computer WAITING for an update. You wouldn't want the guilt of a starving 7 year old on your conscience, would you? I didn't think so. So hop to it, missy!

    Sorry, I can be rather demanding and impatient...just ask Lorett! Kindly ignore that last outburst from me. I'll try to control myself better. Really.

    (Gasping for breath) Must. Have. Update. Soon....

    Ronnie
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  • From ANON - Sakurashope7 on June 25, 2005
    PLEASE REVIEW You are doing such a great job!!!!! Update soon!!!! Please
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  • From ANON - curlyq2713 on June 23, 2005
    ooh this story is very interesting. why is hermione so freakin uptight? she agreed with their little plan, didn't she? hehe, update sooon pleeeaaaase :-)
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  • From ANON - elisha on June 23, 2005
    OMG!!!!!!! I was so totally STOKED when i saw that you put up chapter 4!!!!! amazing work, i can't wait until they "discuss" their arrangement, *grins evily*, so please update update update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sophie on June 23, 2005
    Fantastic! Draco... *drools* and go Hermione! Try and write more!
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  • From ANON - dryhgd on June 23, 2005
    really goodm story...update soon
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  • From kat701 on June 23, 2005
    Love it! LOVE IT! Cannot wait for more! :P
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  • From on June 23, 2005
    Oh, man! This chapter was so funny, espacially when Draco invaded Hermione's personal space in the library. lol. And I just loved the part in the owlery when Hermione totally kicked Ron's ass(I mean, when she gave him a piece of her mind)LOL! And when they got caught by Snape, that was so fucking brilliant, ohh sorry!
    Plz update soon....
    Alana
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  • From ANON - lorett on June 23, 2005
    Hey Darlin!

    Okay, so there were LOTS of fun quotes in this chappie that I just LOVED!

    The first:

    'She might be able to fool Ron, and maybe even Harry, but Ginny was in a completely different league when it came to ferreting out the truth. No pun intended.'

    No pun intended...Hilarious!

    The next ones, my favorite, actually:

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  • From on June 23, 2005
    It's a good plot. I like it. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - PureBloodAzn on June 23, 2005
    Wow, that was ...BEYOND GOOD. Please write some more!
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  • From ANON - Rachel on June 23, 2005
    SO GOOD!!!!!!! Please review really really really soon!!!!!! It is so breathtaking!!!!!!!
    Great Job!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jade on June 18, 2005
    heya! do update soon. and would mind informing me when you have a new chapter available? pretty please? ^^ i included my email chapter.. :D

    i really love this , by the way. :D
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