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Reviews for Jealousy

By : brandnewdaydawning
  • From ANON - Anon on June 03, 2008
    Well I can certainly see why you won your nominations - congratulations, by the way. :) The line about the 'death eaters summer camp' had me in stitches. I look forward to reading more (hopefully soon). :)
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on June 02, 2008
    WOW! i LOVE this story. I love the passion in it. I can't wait for the next chapter!! ^_^
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  • From Given2Fly on June 02, 2008
    *reads new chapter eagerly and sighs happily*


    I've missed this story. ^__^ Don't go away for so long again, por favor!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 02, 2008
    Oh my god, you've finally updated, I love how sensual this is and how hot and steamy this is! I'm so glad you haven't deserted this story. Please update, you are just wonderful at writing. :) Keep it up!
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  • From hippiechick192000 on June 02, 2008
    Rain,

    I am so glad you are back and writing. It was such a shock to log on today and see that you had updated "Jealousy." Just this past weekend I had stumbled across your other story "Obscurity" and was completely blown away by it.

    I've only became a Draco/Hermione fan in the last few months. Since that time, I have read numerous fanfiction stories about these two, but I must say, hands down YOU are the best writer when it comes to capturing these two characters. I love how you continue to interject Draco's snark, even despite his feelings for Hermione.

    "Obsurity" is by far the best story in showing how they are secretly falling for one another, yet still maintain their public personage. "Jealousy" is the greatest story in telling how Draco and Hermione can fall for one another, without planning it, despite being put together as a couple.

    I must say, chapter eight of "Jealousy" is as wonderful as the first seven. I am so looking forward to reading more of your updates and wish you all the best as you continue to bring life and love to our favorite pair: Draco and Hermione.

    Hippiechick192000
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  • From distinctlyME on June 02, 2008
    LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!! I just started reading your story today and I was honestly going to review the chapters but I got so wrapped up in wanting to read the next chapter and the next I forgot all aout my plan to review in the first place. Then I came to the last chapter and was beyond sorely disappointed there wasn't more for me to read. so i thought I'd review and let you know how much I adore it. PLEASEEEEEEEE don't take long to update your next installment.

    In it for the long haul.
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  • From ichiruki on June 02, 2008
    @ ch2 this story is so awesome! i love it! that broom riding scene was so sweet!
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  • From ichiruki on June 02, 2008
    @ ch 1, brilliant start, I can tell I'm going to love what's about to come! (uh, on the re-read I feel I should clarify that no pun was intended!) *blushes*
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  • From mirrorofrapture on January 15, 2008
    MAN!!! Did you abandon this story? It's such a good story (you must have done something right to win two awards, right?). Just as it was getting good, it just stopped. I know it's been a few years, but I can still have hope right? It sucks to be left hanging like this. I hope that you decide to pick it up one day. If you get this review and you've posted this story on a different website and it's farther along, do you think you can email the link to me? email: forlorn_hope365@yahoo.com . It always saddens me when stories are left unfinished.
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  • From GoddessAurora on January 30, 2007
    Obscurity is wonderful and this one is equally good, but I agree it is lighter. Love the line "Dragons don't make good pets!" Lol go Harry, that's the perfect slogan for the Draco/Hermione ship.

    Tell me you're planning on updating soon, if you don't I'll have to resort to making puppy eyes at you!

    Pretty please with a chocolate covered Draco on top!

    Aurora
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  • From ANON - Kisses on December 31, 2006
    Could you please be a dear and update?! You cant just leave us like that!! I'm like in love with this story and will just die if you dont update!!!!! And you wouldnt want that, right? You would want me to stay alive to read more of your wonderfull stories!!! Yay!!! Your so sweet!! :-)

    Thanks oh soooo much!!!!

    ~Kisses~
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  • From ANON - lindsay on December 28, 2006
    this is really welly written.
    but just so u kno, padma is kinda OOC. the character that u portrayed is more parvati or lavender... (as we dfind out in the 6th book)
    padma is a ravenclaw...she's smart.
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  • From ANON - Rooshka on December 27, 2006
    I really like this story. It has so much potential. I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Hope on December 01, 2006
    OKAY!! YOU SO NEED TO UPDATE DUDE!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! IT'S DRIVING MY FRIEND AND I ABSOLUTELY NUTS! PLEASS SS SS SS EEEE UPDATE FOR THE SAKE OF US!!! LIFE CANNOT GO ON WITHOUT THIS AMAZING BREATHTAKING SPINE TINGLING STORY!! PLZ
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  • From ANON - Hope on November 19, 2006
    Hi! Well, I think that I have already said this before, but you really need to write more!!! This is my absolute favorite fan fiction. The tension between the two of them is WOW! So please finish this!
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