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Reviews for Bruised

By : Consternatio
  • From luvhp on May 12, 2008
    Oh GODS, mirrors are definately HOT!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on October 01, 2005
    Almost feel sorry for Harry.
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  • From ANON - creamtea on May 19, 2005
    I've read the three in this series so far, plus Mirror Images. Together - even separately - they are the best writing I've seen on this Board. Fabulous writing - you really get inside their minds, and that's what makes great writing in this genre. What counts is not the brute mechanics of what they do, so much the suggestions of how they feel when they're doing it - and you deliver on that by the bucket-load.

    Your characterisation of Draco is fabulous: intelligent, controlling, aggressive, cold, with that streak of hot anger in him that tells you there's plenty of suppressed backstory. Put Mirror Image and the three Draco/Harry's together and you've obviously got a definite theme running through this: damage, father to son, son to Harry. The question is: can the two boys get it together and turn it back on Lucius? If you were following your theme and stringing it into a novel (and I really think you could go there if you want to, though of course you may not want to) that would be a main question.

    If you do pursue this - either as a novel or a series of linked sequels (same thing really) - then I make one request: please, plaease, please, please, PLEASE don't have your wonderful Draco turn into some camp, crying, angst-ridden, issues-laden, fluffy boy who spends all life running around looking at bathroom fittings for he and Harry's fabulous flat!
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  • From Reyn on May 19, 2005
    oooOOOoo! Looks like Draco is about as lost in this game as Harry is, if not even more. I blame the subtle hints at the end of this story for giving me that idea.
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  • From ANON - Lady X on May 18, 2005
    Mmmmmmm oh gods that was hot... MORE!!!!!!!!!! please more you you are a fucking GOD! at this

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  • From ANON - LPhoenix on May 18, 2005
    these are so hot... i must say that they are very well written, and pretty true to character for both of them thus far... looking forward to the next sequel!
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