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Reviews for Before and After The End

By : MidnightGuardian
  • From ANON - sad on July 23, 2005
    What! you're not going to continue!!! that is waful! i wanted to read the rest. it is a good story plz update soon
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  • From ANON - Demon on July 23, 2005
    and also from just quickly reading over the reviews you have a lot of people who want you to continue becaues this is a fantastic story
    you are a great writer

    As i said before i hope you continue
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  • From ANON - Demon on July 23, 2005
    CONTINUE!!! don't listen to some fucktard who thinks that eveything has to be perfect. your grammer is way better then mine so i won't ever complain and i really hope you continue this story
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  • From ANON - Jademoon on July 23, 2005
    I think you should continue the story. I've just found it and am really liking it. I hope to read more. Grammar skills can be overcome, some of the best authors in history had none. All you need is to find a good beta. There are plenty of available ones of Livejoural, they even have a group just for that. I'd beta for you, but I'm not that great at correcting other people's grammar.
    Please don't discontinue this story.
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  • From ANON - tessa3 on July 23, 2005
    Oh no... you shouldn't end it because of your grammar... i find it interesting.. its different from what people right WAY DIFFERENT and that's what i like... if you want a beta so someone can read it before you post and help with the mistakes then i can help... ^__^ sarafina14@hotmail.com... this ismy email.. i think you should continue.. i really want to know what Luc and Cissa knows about Sev
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  • From ANON - blue_lilly1023 on July 23, 2005
    your story is great, the idea is very original and that is what counts. don't worry about your grammarical errors, everyone has there weak points. so please continue your story for i realy am attached to it already.
    ps. if you need help with your grammar or spelling, i would gladly help you.
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  • From ANON - Jagwarakit on July 23, 2005
    omg, you had so better finish this. so what if you have bad grammer/spelling, so do i. this is a wonderful story that takes a common theme (harry not being completely human) and makes it original again. i really hope you finish this 'cause i so wanna know who harry's mate is and what will happen with the rest of the students and hermonie and ginny and all that stuff.
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  • From ANON - choraleart on July 22, 2005
    Please continue the story. I have just discovered it and have enjoyed it very much. grammer is not that big of a deal. I people say it's bad then ignore them. I await (hopefully) for an update to your little kitty (fey) story.

    choraleart
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  • From ANON - Shame Ness on July 22, 2005
    i though tit was good the the grammer was bad but you could always get a beta, and its really not that bad of grammer I have seen way worse on this site with people who dont even care, if you continue I will read
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  • From ANON - Starynightchild on July 22, 2005
    If you do not continue with this story, I will personally hunt you down,
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  • From ANON - GruenerWackelpudding on July 22, 2005
    we're not perfect are we? just search for a beta and then you can say f*ck me grammar skills ^_^ I'm not the best myself but at least I got a good excuse ^_~
    so go on writing! I know what you meant with most of the things and that is what counts
    GW
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  • From ANON - sylvyrblade on July 22, 2005
    i know you asked if you should continue, due to what you seem to consider grievous grammar, but i can honestly say that i would like to see where you plan to go with the story. frankly, in my own experience, the two best things that help that particular difficulty are beta-readers and practice. it may seem like snobby advice, but i know that i still look back at my first fics with a wince and a laugh, and that i was woman enough to admit that i could use improvement. getting someone to read things over really does help, as does reading it aloud to someone. when speaking it or having someone else read, the extra attention seems to pick mistakes you didn't realise were there.

    honestly, i'm enjoying catboy!harry and would love to see what it is that lucius and narcissa think snape should tell him. i also look forward to draco's reaction to the new, fluffy and adorable potter... i hope you choose to continue and polish your skills. time is the best teacher of all.
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  • From ANON - Natalie on July 22, 2005
    Please Continue with the story, I like it when harry turn into things and draco is his mate, Please, please, please continue, I don't mind the grammer, other stories i've read had worse. When i found this story, i read it four times.
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  • From ANON - bob on July 22, 2005
    I am enjoying this. I dont understand some parts but its still good
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  • From ANON - mothermindgames on July 22, 2005
    Your story is good but you need to spend more time with each chapter before you post. Read, re-read, and then read each sentence, paragraph, and page again. It's true that you have a lot of mistakes in your story but most of them are simple things like mixed up words (example: surrogate not seargent). Find a decent beta to review and edit your chapters and you should be fine. The mistakes in your story are distracting and fustrating for the reader and that may be why you've receieved discouraging reviews. The one thing I believe that you should NOT do is stop writting. If writting this story makes you happy then continue. Realize that the opinion of random people on the internet only hurts you if you let it. After all, has anyone who negatively reviewed your fanfics ever written any of their own? They probably can't do any better. I leave you with two cliche sayings: first, Rome wasn't built in a day, and second, practice makes perfect. If you enjoy writting and work at it then you'll get better over time. Don't let a few idiots get in the way of doing what you love.
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